The Crimson Quill

A Very Interesting Read

As I read through the first chapter, I started getting annoyed with the slow pace of the story. But eventually, I realised that I must enjoy this slow pace. All the details and descriptions made me feel different things. It made me enjoy the inane, mundane day to day affairs, and the sudden curveball the author threw at me when she suddenly started talking about humans and non-humans. I mean, I knew it was Sci-fi, but I expected some 'brace yourself' text. But I liked the suddenness of the introduction. Everything seemed rather human and mundane until that point.

As far as writing goes, there were some grammatical errors here and there but nothing that would stop you from reading. The flow of the story could also be a little better with filling in gaps and stretching out some scenes. But then, it is up to the author's discretion. Overall, I really liked reading it. I read the story well. Good job, and don't stop writing!

Wow!

Oh, my god. The style of writing was so much like the greats in historical fiction that I have read! I didn't even think about the review until the very end because I was so absorbed in the tale. I read this story very well. The descriptions were crisp and not too elaborate to the point where people are bored to tears; the dialogues were so well written that I enjoyed the back and forth banter of the sisters very enjoyable; the scene- and mood-setting were done very well. I was actually able to see the scene in my mind's eye. It was a great experience which not many writers can bring to the reader. I especially liked the prologue which quickly and immediately sets the tone of mystery and intrigue in the story. The grammar and punctuation in this story are near-perfect. There were no obstacles of errors which stopped me as I was reading. Thanks for this experience, and I hope you keep writing!

A nice read, but could do with a little improvement

The idea of the story was good. The way it was constructed, structured and written technically was also good. But I think some of his hopelessness and helplessness was not very well defined, in the middle. If the/ author could just have increased the anxiety with the pace as to make it reach a climax, then him being fired would be bursting the balloon of tension.

As it is, it's a nice read. But it doesn't make me feel for the protagonist if that is what you want me to.

A different idea which could do with some polish

Frankly, I enjoyed reading this story. It didn't have great grammar, it didn't have much of character development. But I loved the flow of the story. The way one thing led to another. Some scenes could have been added to make the connectivity better, but overall, the flow was good. Another thing I liked is the themes the author addressed -- coping with grief, feminism, equality and striking a balance between being strong and weak. I enjoyed the story mainly because these themes were decently brought out.

I hope the author doesn't stop writing and gives us more stories (with improved grammar!). Thanks a lot for this book. I had a great time reading it.