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Just another Human soul finding life's purpose through her Passion 💕

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A Werewolf Fantasy.

It is different from most of the werewolf stories out there. Killian is a human like werewolf where as Helena and her family represents wolves more efficiently.

The only problem I came across in the story is the writing style. While reading about character's emotions it feels more like an informative text than a story. It's as if the main leads are telling the reading about their feelings with their POV rather than showing. You use alot of "I said, I did, I felt." Try to lessen their use so that the story flows smoothly.

It's a good work in the making! :)

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Well planned

The writer has made sure to not lose all her secrets at once but spill them one after the other. The mystery and cliffhanging endings makes the reader to hop onto the next chapter. Destiny's character is mute and not once in the past chapters I felt she's lacking in expressing herself through actions louder than words. Whereas Damien bejng an assasin is pro at observing people thus making them a perfect pair for each other. I would conclude my review with the saying "Hard work increases the probability of serendipity." The writer's hard work is showing through the chapters and this work should get as much as attention as it deserves!

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A smooth flowy read.

The writer had put a lot of efforts in descriptions whether it was for Olivia or Rachel or the Place Heartland and India.

Being an Indian I am really excited to see how India plays a cupid in blooming the bud of love between the main leads.

All the best to talented writer. Keep up the descriptive writing it really flows like water in a river, smoothly.

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Amazed!

I wouldn't be surprised if I find The Trident as an Netflix Original in the coming years! Believe me it's that good. The way writer keeps you intrigued with every word is beyond my reach. It's like you know your target audience.
The hopeless romantic in me already ships for #RaWen ;)

I didnt find any major problems apart from grammatical mistakes which are easy to be edited.

To be honest I have never tried Murder Mysteries, it's surprising that I really look forward for the next chapter.

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Friendzone

It's a nice read when you sit near the fire place with hot cup of chocolate milk/ coffee on a chilly day. No care in the world it's just you and the characters in the book.

The pace of the book is slow and the writer has made sure to point out minor details perfectly!

Would love to read further as well ;)

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Heart of the Beast.

This book is different from anyother Supernatural books I've read till date. I really like the plot but the epilogue was rushed. The sudden appearance of so many unknown characters in the last chapter didn't do justice to the beauty of the book.

The epilogue focused on trivial matters than Tiberius and Crystal's relationship over the 8-10 yrs.

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