Therandom1here

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No character development

I loved Caytln but there was zero character development for Magnar He didn't repent for any of the sins he did against Caytln and Cayln could have been a stronger heroine. I know English isn't your first language but it was still pretty understandable. Keep writing cause you can only get better from there. You could have added a lot more chapters to see more Character development with Caytln too. Other than that the book was really good.

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