Therie Margaret Miracle

Naijah City

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Unleashed.

I enjoyed it, please write more!

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Candyland

Actually I don't do horror stories but I found it easy to read and understand so thumbs up for writing style it really flowed and the stream was steady.

I got distracted a bit by her inner ranting on and on about the casual sex with Tony and the whole trying to be a normal teen thing it took me out of it like wait: protagonist is a normal teen, yeah? Her A plus and all wasn't presented in a genius superhero kind of way so why the self quest to be normal? I didn't get that...

The use of Arnold Swartzzzzz okay I do this too and now I see it's kind of silly it doesn't recommend the book or emphasize a point in fact in this chapter it kind of trivialized this scene adding to the underlying humour though I'm supposed to be getting thrills and chills...

Okay overall not bad for a beginning, but I'd give it a five star though there's room for improvement. Great writing!

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