Ayalantara

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Fast Paced and Action Ready

The characterization is very well done. I have an immediate understanding of the personalities of each character and they all come across as individuals. I would like to see more elaboration on the events that take place, especially in the beginning chapters, it would help get a grasp of the world and emotionally connect to Ophelia.

So far it’s a faced paced story that draws the reader in to see how everything will unfold.

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