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Fun!

Great pulpy romp!
Always enjoy the kind of denouement used here.
Maybe the frenetic delivery of events could have been more incorporated into the style, or the events could have been boiled down a little more to their essence. Maybe leaving names out completely could have contributed to more of a sense of distance and anonymity.

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