Bella Kanaday

I am a student who loves the performing arts and would rather write stories than do my homework. (Let's be honest; we all know that writing the stories will teach me more, right?)

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Luminous

Beautifully written story. I really loved how quickly I was drawn into the world and the characters' lives. I especially enjoyed the balance between description, narration, dialogue, etc., as this really contributed to the pacing and development of the story and its characters. I also loved how creative the story is (plot, setting, character personalities, etc.); it always kept me on my toes a bit and left me wanting more.

My only critical feedback is that the narrative would occasionally shift from past to present tense, but the rest of it was incredibly well done. Overall, I really loved this story and would definitely reccomend it to anyone looking for a good fantasy/high fantasy novel.

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Great Fanfiction

This story just kept me up until 1 am reading it, and I have absolutely no regrets about it. I literally couldn't put it down. It was incredible how the story made me really care about and connect with the characters in spite of the fact that, being a huge fan of the Hunger Games, I already knew when and how they were going to die. Aside from a couple spelling mistakes, everything was incredible. I was especially impressed with the plot and character development. I feel like it can be really hard to pull off good fanfiction, but this nailed it. Love the writing style, great job overall. I would definitely be interested in reading more stories by this author.

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A Legacy of Pain

The way the author was able to balance and contrast hope and despair in the face of the brutal reality of the setting made the plot and the characters very real and sympathetic. I also loved how there was a beauty to the bitterness: it wasn't just sad with no purpose. Incredible work.

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