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I DOWNRIGHT LOVE THIS BOOK!

Sorry, I got a little carried aways with the all capital title😅😅 But... that's the point! Your booking is AMAZING! I loved every sentence of it. It has the perfect mixture of sweetness, cuteness, intensity, heartbreak (which is making me desperately wait for another chapter update) and everything else you need. Above all, I loved the quirky and witty comments thrown offhandenly by Zoey and Izzie. They're both so adorable. And Nate and Zoey make the perfect pair! The only thing I want now is new updates! 😍

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A truly remarkable work!

I feel like this story is the perfect example of what a fantasy should be like. The author has such an impressive way with words that I could literally imagine every single events as if i were watching a movie. The plot is great and had me hooked until the very last chapter. This is, without a doubt, very much worth reading.

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Impeccable writing

Well, the first thing I loved when I started your story was the beginning. I loved the way you started off your story and your way of writing is awesome! This has been a different but an equally thrilling experience reading your work. I felt like I was literally flowing with the characters here. To sum up, your work is amazing!

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Wow!

Well, there's nothing much to say except that I love the way you write! Everything is described so well and the story description is just so impressive. It pulled me right into your story. I love your work and will look forward to the next updates! Good job!

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Refreshing

Well, the plot is quite unique and so refreshing! And the way you write, I could literally imagine those flowers and birds like you described so well. (Although by me imagining those, I'm just talking about some giant animals dressed in flowery outfit if that makes sense... I mean that's where my imagination is limited to😅😅😂) Anyways, jokes apart, I really enjoyed your story, the two chapters published so far and would be waiting for more. However, just a little suggestion: I personally think that it would be even better if you break down the paragraphs so that it doesn't look too bulky. Somebody had suggested me about that and now I see that it does make a difference. I mean it's so easy to read when you're met with smaller paragraphs and adequate spacing instead of bulky walls of text. But of course, that doesn't really deter my fascination with your story. It's really amazing! Keep it up!

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Intriguing

It's only one chapter published so far but it already has me captivated! I loved the summary that alone draws the readers in. The way you've described the setting is really good and I absolutely loved the first chapter. I would love to read more of it! Good job!

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Good one!

So....starting from the beginning, the summary is good and interesting. The beginning of the story is also quite good and it is capable of holding the reader's attention. However, I must say that there were quite a number of grammar errors which were slightly disturbing. Other than that, I think it's a good story and has a good potential. Keep it up!

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So far so good

Okay, so... as only one chapter is published so far, I can't really say much about the story. But judging by the summary and the first chapter, I'd say that you're a good storyteller and the story's gonna be amazing. I found some grammar errors around but nothing big enough. The beginning alone in itself was quite captivating and I'd love to read more of it!

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Heart touching!!!

I'm not normally one into poetry and this is the first one I've read on inkitt but... wow! The words are so deep they went straight to my heart. I have no words to express my love for your words. This is really very good. Just a little suggestion: I personally think that your poems should be a little longer. You have that potential to increase the length without degrading the quality of your words. So I just think that it'll be more satisfying to read your poem if it's a little longer. But even then, I simply love your poems! Great job!!!

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Lovely beginning

Absolutely loved it! The summary is just so captivating! And the two chapters published so far does not disappoint the readers at all. The plot is really very interesting and story progression is really good, too. I couldn't help but be disappointed as there were only two chapters updated. Now I'm just waiting eagerly for the next update! Great job!

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So far, so good

Alright, I found the story quite sweet so far. It starts off pretty well and has a good description of characters. The summary is quite interesting as well. And there is adequate description of the environmental settings which I liked. However, there are some places that I think you might want to improve. Like, grammar and punctuation for instance. I saw that there were lowercase letters in the beginning of most of the sentences which I found a little disturbing as it was something I'm not used to. And I think the story needs a little work on present and past tense as they are mixed up at some places. But all in all, I'd say it's a really good story. I love the bits of humor in the story and think that it's going to be an interesting read once you overlook some of the errors. I hope this review helps a little! Keep up with your good work!

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Intensively sweet!

I LOVE this book! And I mean that in a 'I'm-yelling-out-loud-and-I-don't-care' kind of way!😅 I love it's title that itself is intriguing. Then I love the summary which is even more alluring. Then the inside of the story... just loved it! It's a huge FIVE STARS for me! Good job, author!

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Has potential with good editing

Well, the summary is intriguing. It makes the readers want to read more of the story. The plot is also quite good. But the problem comes with the really fast pace of the story. The story escalates very fast right after the beginning that made me quite confused. Also, there were lots of grammar errors that could be improved. And personally, I think a little more background description and description of the characters could do good with the story. I suggest setting the pace so that the story becomes more enjoyable instead of rushed like I felt while reading. But apart from these little errors, I'd say it does have a potential and could do really well with proper polishing.

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Interesting

Well, the summary is quite captivating and the plot is good. I was instantly drawn to your story with your summary. But there were quite a lot of grammar errors in terms of present and past tense, mostly. And there were some errors in spellings and such which can get in the way of smooth reading. So you might want to fix those. But other than that, I think it's a good read so far. The author's way of writing is commendable and with a few editing, I can say it's got a good potential.

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Lovely beginning

It has such a sweet beginning!😍😍 I loved every sentence of it! The story outline seems sweet and there weren't any grammar errors I could find. I'm quite disappointed that only one chapter is published so far. I'll be waiting for the next chapter with bated breath. Literally 😅😍😍🥰

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Absolutely intriguing

I absolutely loved the story! It was like watching a thriller movie with perfect mixture of adventure, action, fantasy and many more that I can't even list out. The summary alone got me captivated and the rest of the story was equally intriguing. Honestly speaking, I somewhat felt like the story was a little too straightforward, like the characters moved a little too fast and I personally feel that a little more background and characters' description could make it even more interesting but that might be the intent of the author. Anyhow, I really enjoyed the book and couldn't find a reason why it deserves any less than five stars!
P.S. I really loved the mysterious ending as well! Good job!

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A good read

I love the beginning of the story, the way you've described every setting and events occurring in the story. The author has a unique way of writing that pulls the readers right in and leave them wanting to read more. I got a little confused as the story suddenly jumps forward from the prologue but I'm sure things will start making sense once the other chapters are published. However, I feel that a summary would be more helpful to get a general idea about where the story is going. That being said, I personally think that it's going to be a wonderful story once you get a hang of the storyline. All in all, I think it has a great potential and I can't wait for more chapters. The author has done a remarkable job with this!

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Go, Carson!😅

Okay, I love the badass alpha Carson 😅 She has a strong personality and from what I've read so far, the story is going on great. I found some grammar errors and I personally felt like the story progressed a little too fast for me to comprehend. It might just be me though. But I must say, the plot is amazing and truly intriguing. I like what you've written so far and will be looking forward to the next updates!

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A good one

The thing I loved the most about your book is your selection of characters. The female protagonist is not some powerless, soft spoken nobody like you find in most of the stories. She's equally as powerful and strong as her mate and that makes the story more intriguing. I love the plot and couldn't find any significant grammar errors. All in all, I loved it!

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Loved it!

Absolutely loved it. The beginning is the part that I loved the most. It pulls the readers right in. And the way the story unfolds has me falling even more in love with the story. I found some tiny bits of grammar errors but they're not that big to deter my love for the story though! I think it's really a good read.

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Dangerous to my heart😅

Phew! 😅 Only two chapters and my heart is beating like crazy. The starting is absolutely intriguing and every sentence has the potential to give a bone chilling effect to the readers. The story telling is incredible. The way you've described the setting and the motion of the characters has me spellbound. It's definitely one I wouldn't mind waiting for the next update. Good job!

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A good one!

The beginning of the story is great. It makes you want to read more of it and the chapters that follow don't disappoint the readers at all. In fact, they're even better. I felt like you might want to look onto your grammar and punctuation a little bit, as for example, I think it would sound better if you include commas and exclamation marks and others while stating a conversation. That way, the readers can actually imagine the tone that the characters are speaking with, whether it is an angry call or a playful one and so on. It's what I felt like anyway. But the plot of the story more than makes up for everything else. It has a good potential and I really enjoyed reading your story.

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Got me totally hooked

Okay, I actually wanted to start it off with a couple of chapters so that I have a general idea about the plot but even I could stop even after I reached halfway to it. Every chapter had me on the edge and I really enjoyed this thrilling journey. I found some tiny errors with grammar, like a little mixture of past and present tense that you might want to see to,but overall, I must say, it's definitely worth reading. I love it!

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A fantastic fantasy!

I know, only four chapters are published so far. Well, five, if you count the first one I assume it the prologue. But let me tell you, even these few chapters are so good that I suddenly want to read the next one as fast as I can and at the same time wait for the whole book to be completed so that I could binge read it without torturing myself with the wait for a new chapter every now and then. The story actually got me goosebumps as I read about the transformation of Wren. And everything is just so... fantastic! I just can't wait for another chapter.

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Captivating

Okay, I'm in love with the way you write. Every sentence I read made me feel like I was right there with the characters. The sentences were very well formed and the plot was great, too. I couldn't find a flaw in your writing. Great work of fiction!

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Bewitching😍

So, I love the beginning of the story. Even the synopsis and prologue had me captivated. The writing style is great from what I've read so far. I'm a bit disappointed that only three chapters are published so far. But yeah, it's definitely a five star for me and I know I'll be eagerly waiting for each update! Good job!

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A good one, really

Well, I found the story quite good so far. The arrogant and possessive Italian and feisty Filipino make quite a couple with their constant disagreements. However, I thought the first few chapter were a bit like going on circles. Like she keeps on running and he chases her everytime but as the story progresses on, I must say I found it kinda sweet the way Massimo softens for her. There are some grammar errors that I noticed like in terms of tense and spellings but other than that, I love your story! I'll definitely be sticking up to it until the end!😊

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Unique

So, even with few chapters, this book has me completely hooked. The story is not like any other I've read before and the author's way of writing was simple, yet captivating. Simply put, I love this book already and am desperately waiting for more chapters. It's definitely a five star for me. :)

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Sweet

Okay, so I found the story quite sweet. I instantly fell in love with the big bad but adorable pouty Alexios and lovely, smart Ysabel. There were some incidents and conversations which were incredibly funny as well and those just made my day. However, I was left somewhat disappointed with the random turn of events such as their marriage and how things progressed afterward. And the end, I felt was a little dissatisfying. Or is it the end or are their more chapters to follow? Forgive me if there are more chapters remaining but if there are more ti come, I can't wait to read them. I felt there were some little errors in grammar but other than that, it's a really good story that has the perfect mixture of sweetness, darkness, mystery, romance and everything you would want in a romance story. I really enjoyed reading it and will be waiting if there are, indeed, other chapters coming along!

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Intriguing

Simply intriguing. That's the only word I can think of. I read all chapters written so far in a single sitting and although I was a little confused for the first couple of chapters, I became more and more transfixed by the events as the story went in. It has a perfect mixture of adventure, uniqueness, mystery, thriller and I'm sure a sizzling romance is to come soon. Overall, it's been an interesting experience and I can't wait for the story to be completed!!! You've done a really good job, author!

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