Tiasshy

France

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Good, needs a little polishing

I like your story, but I think your story telling might need just a little bit more time. How you form sentences, where to stop and when to continue. Honestly I am not that much of a fan of high school drama, but your story was nice, had a good flow. Keep up the good work

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