Tori Carter

Wife. Dog-mom. Photographer. Budding Author. Employed full AND part-time in Healthcare, but I write when I can. Hope you like what you read! Looking forward to hearing your thoughts on my books! ❤🙂🙂

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Algea the intriguing!

Hooked me from the jump! There's just enough left to the imagination to keep me invested while still giving me an idea of how the author sees this world. The characters are intriguing and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Couple things I noticed were the tense, and some skipping on descriptions (like when Enyo killed the kid, for instance). I didn't see any punctuation or grammar issues, but some more/clearer detail in spots would be a plus.

That being said, I'm very intrigued by your characters and can't wait to see how they develop as the story progresses. Please keep writing!!🙂🙂

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Well done!

Very well written. Characters were unique and intriguing. Some minor grammatical issues, but not enough to distract from the overall story. So glad I found this author. Thoroughly enjoying reading what has been written and will definitely be recommending to others. :)

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