𝑇𝑂𝑌𝐴 𝐵𝑅𝐼𝐺𝐻𝑇

Brilliant (read up to chapter four)

This book is amazing, the best that I’ve read this week. It’s so interesting and I must warn that there’s a scene with rape but I love how the author leaves tok for us to judge. We get to LIVE OUT, Emmerson and Stoic. I love the imaginary, I was practically living through Em’s eyes. I love the beginning scene before I knew it mentioned r*pe. It was very hot and steamy. However, I wish the author told us where they are living - it’s a place where it’s developed in some areas and then not. Where is it called and why is the place like that? I would love 200 words on that.

I’m curious of how this becomes a romance when stoic clearly is a r*pist. That’s what the author portrayed. I’m sticking around to see how this author pitches stoic to us. There are survives and so they should be careful.

I wish there was more description on stoic it’s just assumed that he’s good looking. The only idea I have was from the first scene. I wish this book had at least 10 chapters already published but it’s okay. I really enjoyed this read.

I’ve got a few books in the works with Nordic men so this pushed my passion (in some respects). I really like this. The book is HEAVILY described but it’s just the right amount. I loved the scene when she’s playing in the river, the trees. It’s beautiful. This author has stuck the perfect balance between - describing/creative writing and the delivery of the dialogue.

My message to this author is to not overly critique your work. As writers we do that. Your book is very readable even though English is your second language. As a native - I still struggle with grammar.

I can’t wait for this story to unfold. I will be looking for regular updates!

Great!

The beginning of the book was amazing but after a while the text was sloppy and there was a lot of space in the chapters none the less I completely understand.

I enjoyed the first few chapters were filled with amazing descriptions of the character for example, Maria’s eyes. I really loved it and that’s one point that’s stuck out for me.

Also I would like to say that the storyline is amazing, for a beginning and for a few hours on creating each chapter it would be more better.

I love it! Though, so please read!

Amazing read! I can’t wait for more!

(I read up to chapter 4) I really like this book. I haven’t found a book that talks about Irish-ness and Irish culture. Everything was well written and you can tell from reading this book that every chapter is revised and edited.

The description was freaking and not repetitive in any way whatsoever. I enjoyed the text that it’s another language. It was in italics and I love it.

This author presents the character Micheál very well. The characters emotions are developed and portrayed throughout the text and dialogue. The description of the environment and the surrounding of Micheál and their family was amazing to read.

This reader has transported you into their world. Also, the third person was written thoroughly!

¡Fanastico! (Mi primer idioma es inglés, lo siento)

Mi español es esto mal pero tu novela es perfecto 🥰, tu novela es facialmente, interestante y fantastico. Mi favourito es aviso.

English; my Spanish is bad but I love your book, it’s perfect, it’s easy to read, interesting and fantastic. My favourite poem is aviso.

Lo siento, ¿como se dice “poems/poetry” en espanol?

Translation; I’m sorry, how do you say poems in Spanish.

Anyway, I saw this and I gave this poems book a try and I love it. It’s easy to read, I really like the author’s poems and I hope they write more! T

Brilliant (read up to Chapter 32)

This author excels at description however, it becomes too overbearing when there is dialogue. I believe that the dialogue was created well, and this author seems experienced to some level however for some people by having description after dialogue for every chunk of speech. It makes it harder for the chat to flow, I would suggest what some publish author’s do, which is leaving one piece of dialogue without description (for the earlier chapters, it’s just a bit too dense). Just to add a bit more complexity to the book. The description is astounding. Also, there is a description that’s always above the text or dialogue for example, in with Brad, it seems like you’re describing brad, but it’s not connected to the text.
Even though, this book is described very well, I would suggest looking at your earlier chapters as they stand out for the reader. I would suggest the main character explaining what’s happening, so it allows the writer a bit of context. This is because, sometimes readers come offline and therefore when they come back to read, they might not remember everything that happened in the last chapter.
This book is absolutely amazing on the writing style and punctuation level but there are times where the characters seem underdeveloped in text or dialogue. I want to know Brad’s personality (as well as other characters) from the start.
I know it’s a fantasy, but I feel that at sometimes there isn’t a description like there would be in fantasy for example, ‘green meadows’ I know it’s cliché but more description on the area, it’s assumed, and I know it’s hard to edit and read over but that’s what caught my eye.
Ultimately what needs to be altered, is the description, we’ve got to know where Caelynn is sometimes I am constantly guessing the area and it doesn’t need a big paragraph, there can be scenes where you indicate for example, ‘she walks down the stony path’ or ‘she tried to get on the truck, but she slipped. Brad helped her up by using his hand’. These changes could help lift this book because clearly, you took your time.
But honestly, this book is great and throughout the chapters, you can see the author’s hard work.

Tension was built (super scared!)

This story is so scary. The author talks about the storyline very well itsdeveloped. It’s scary and not funny at all. All of the scenes where deltailed and I was on the edge of my seat, waking for more. Honestly if horror is your type, then pls read it :)

Great story, give me a read!

Sonia was described very well. I really enjoyed this book, I’m not really into fantasy but it’s amazing. I think everyone should give this book a read.

The third person was done well but I would say that most chapters I felt like the dialogue could be improved but this is a great start on their first book on their account.

Keep pushing!

Great start

I’m really in love your character Kathy, the author has taken time to write throughout. I can’t wait for this book to unfold. I’m looking forward to more updates!

This book is UNDERRATED.

This book is one of my favourites because it challenges the norms, it talks about what it feels like when you live in foster care, it talks about Caiden and the reason why she is the way that she is, why is she selfish? You have to read to know. These are one of the books which I am most proud of because it touches on issues that I rarely see in books.

Ida is a character where we see in everyday light but no one see her struggles, she's a black girl with so many problems. It's hard because I hate that this book is UNDERRATED.

This author has worked hard, this book is far beyond a romance, it touches on themes or what happens when you live in the hood, how it feels. This book should be read, commented and celebrated.

There's a Caiden in our lives and then there's an Ida, which one are you?

Uniquely different

I love how different angles is a poetry book about the different perspectives of people’s lives. Every poem was memorable and different than before!

Everyone loves the theme

They loved the novel, Ofra and Owen! Everyone loved to know about the past relationships of Ofra.

Vivi!!! This book is amazing

The humour, it’s so easy to read, I love Vivi. I’m halfway there and I still want to review.

Hopefully I’ll make another review when I finish this book!

Deep dark and beautiful

This book is beautifully written, I love the story about a black women who is lighter, I’ve never come across a book like this. As a girl who is often confused as mixed race when in fact I’m black, it’s amazing to read a book about the small struggles I
have!

I know for a fact, that this author has taken creative writing courses - it’s so good. I would say that this book has a trigger warning but this book is nothing short of what my dad forced me to read when I was younger.

It displays real ness! But realness is also very hard to digest.

This book is so good, but trigger warnings (I can’t disclose) but be sure. There’s trauma.

I’ve read this book on Wattpad and now here!

I was at a really bad place and this book gave me Yh passion to write books about plus size women, understanding your body and treating it right. I was one of the few first people to read this book - it was the first Wattpad book at I finished with an account (at that time, on Wattpad you didn’t need an account to read, lol).

This book is interesting and it has a place in my heart, I really wonder how NK Pockett does it - she (I hope it’s the correct pronouns) has been giving the online community with books upon books and I wonder how.

I believe it’s a gift by God - I hope she uses it wisely and takes care of her body as she writes these books.

NK Pockett books are character developed well, the structure is always perfect and if it isn’t, she works on it in a few months, you hardly tell the difference.

I wish I had the willpower just like her - she just likes to write books, it’s her stress reliever (form my point of view) she just has a plot she wants and she gives the MOST realistic ends - it helps me!

I could go on and on with this review but this book means a lot for me! A LOT!

Do you like?

If any of you like the beginning then I will post the whole book on Inkitt.

The writing is terrible but I want to have a romance book which isn’t bad and reflects my writing now. I prefer to write fresh works/books.

Tessa is great!

I can’t wait to get to know Tessa, throughout this book.

Thought provoking

Love it and I can’t wait to read more!

Great! Can’t wait

I am going to be bias because I like this book, I can’t wait for the story to progress and be finished so I can read each chapter in peace x

Good

Very helpful