Wow. I mean, just wow. That was my initial response. Typically, I like to scroll through a few of the new stories to see if anything strikes my fancy or gives me an idea for a title. I don't know what made me click on this story, but I did. It was the most amazing twist of fate. First, let me begin by saying that the way the character's thoughts just seem to pour out his mind so flawlessly despite the fact that the reader reads the book as if the character is speaking to them would make any reader feel like they know him and what he is going through. Also, I typically find the use of profanity in a novel provocative and distracting from the story itself, but here, it is masterful. It helps the reader understand the emotions the character has toward his life. I find that I must also mention the fact that other than like one punctuation error in the very beginning, (which is better than many professional writers) the grammar, punctuation, spelling, and general correctness of the writing piece is absolutely astonishingly well-done. I have never seen anything like this and wouldn't be surprised if this book became a Bestseller.
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