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Peyton Davis
Welcome to my profile! I'm Peyton and I mostly write fantasy books with a dash of action/adventure. Please check out my current project Warriors: Rising. I hope that you like the story!
Like it so far! Keep improving!
So far, I'm interested in seeing where this story goes! I feel sorry for Gareth Moon and the fact that the adults and authority figures around him don't care enough to help is really upsetting. After reading the first chapter, I hope that his situation gets much better. Some improvements to the story could definitely help as well. Maybe try shortening the long paragraphs, by just cutting them into pieces. The story moved pretty fast from the beginning so moe detailed description could help along with improving the grammar and punctuation too. Overall, I enjoyed reading and I'll definitely come back and read Chapter Two!
Read the story nowThe story is great so far! (2 chapters read)
After reading the first two chapters, I'm very interested in where the story will take us! I love how the story is centered around giants because it's so rare! It's quite original and it definitely pulled me in! The multiple points of view can be written successfully but instead of first person, the writer should have written in third person and try not make the pace so fast when the pov's are switched. Maybe giving each character a chapter could've helped. Other than that I really enjoyed reading the story and I can't wait to read more!
Read the story nowSaved
I love the story so far and I didn't expect to get the Miller's perspective in the very first chapter. The plot is very interesting and I'm always a sucker for a great crime and mystery book. I can't wait to read more and see just what the author has in store for us!
Read the story nowBad Blood
From the very beginning of the book, the story is intense, and I absolutely love it! The dialogue, especially during the restaurant scene, had me on the edge of my seat. I love how descriptive the author is. I can't wait to dive more into this book!
Read the story nowCreature Seers
I really like this story so far! The plot is extremely unique. I've never read anything like it! I ABSOLUTELY love how the author is bringing Korean culture into the book using certain phrases like Eomma and Appa. The dialogue is pretty great too. It just feels so natural. I can't wait to read more!
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