V_Dormouse

Very Enjoyable

Hi I really like your story. I do find that it can seem a little rushed in places, mainly when you are trying to convey a lot of information in a short span of time, for example when the Dragons were giving Kaze his gifts and saying goodbye, I know some people say things like 'don't take ten words to say what can be said in three' but sometimes it can be better to write more rather than less.

Overall I love the plot and really look forward to reading more on this, please do continue it.

Keep writing and have fun

V.