Valykyle

Nice!

OMG OMG OMG! You have so many interesting plot twists! It's so good! I honestly have no feedback besides going back and checking some grammar stuff. Good job! I'll be waiting for the next update! ;)

Interesting

So- I did think it would only be fair to review one of your books because you reviewed a couple of my short stories. And it did take a while and for that I apologize.

Let me start off by saying that this was a very detailed book in terms of ice skating moves. But it felt kind of dry. I didn’t really feel the emotion. I don’t know if that was just me but it wasn’t enough. It needed a kablam, a surprise element, a twist. Otherwise, it felt pretty okay.

But there was something that kept me out of the story a bit. I don’t know if this was spelling mistakes or something but some words just didn’t fit in? I can’t remember the exact one but there was the word “fried” in a sentence and it didn’t really make sense to me? Now, I am just a high school girl and I might be reading too little into it, but it didn’t make any sense. I think it was on Chapter 12 or 13.

But, overall, it was an amazing book! We saw the things love does as well as the power of forgiveness and that was pretty dope!

Keep on writing!

Don't enter it-

ONE BOOK. I entered one book- With not even 10 chapters in it. But it takes my judge more than a month to read it. And every time I asked, I had to wait more than a day for a reply, even by email. My deadline for my review got pushed back to April 4th. April 4th. 15 freaking days ago. After the competition was already over. Like what the hell? I had to post on multiple people’s walls to get my information. And I didn’t even get a reply for one of them. It was deleted off their wall.

The judges don’t even know half of what’s going on. I had to wait more than a month for my review, I didn’t even get a score, and I didn’t even get notified that I hadn’t made it to round 2. Like what even? And my judge was just posting about how many followers she has and a bunch of spam posts that was useless to me. Just a complete waste of time.

When I got my review, it seemed forced and didn’t have anything I could do better. Just said, “Nice job. Plot is a bit of drag.” I paraphrased that but like- that’s how easy it was to paraphrase my review.

On top of that, I was misgendered when my pronouns were clearly in my bio.

Terrible way to start out my first writing competition. Won’t be entering in the future.

Hooked since the first stoplight

This was an amazing book omg! It was funny, sad, and just overall a really good book! We see so many different elements and the writing style is wow! Updates were super quick as well! I'll definitely be waiting for more of your books!

This should be a movie!

This book was hilarious. It was sad. (only in a couple parts) It was the best book I've ever read on Inkitt! It was amazing! Like no joke, I want this to be a movie! And I would totally watch it! Nice work!

Amazing but....

Okay so I just finished the series... I loved it! All the plot twists, Kallie and Brett and Clark and Bells giving hilarious dares, Raine's tickleshness, all of it! But there are a couple things that you could fix. There's many missing words or misuse of certain words and that kind of pulls you out of the story so if you could fix those, that would be great! Loved your book!

Good but could be better

It was an amazing story with an amazing plotline! But you could tell that it was very rushed. We didn't get all the details and most people love seeing details.. So maybe go back and slow it down a bit! Other than that, t was an amazing story with lots of potential!

Just... Wow

I'm halfway through the 1st chapter right now but I can already tell it's going to be amazing. The details, the effort put into it, everything is so beautiful. This is amazing so far and I would definitely recommend reading it!

Very well written

I loved this book! The plot twists, the evil nosy teacher, all of it. Your grammar was exceptional and your writing style was *chef's kiss* Any reader considering reading this book, should definitely read this!

Amazing!

It was very well written! I love the way they went together but I'm disappointed there's no more. Maybe you could start another story with short fillers? I think a lot of readers, including myself, would be super happy to get more of Vincent and Nick! I really loved this story overall! (Sorry for the kind of short review)

Congratulations!

Congrats on finishing the book! And thank you for recommending this to me! I loved the plotline! The recovery part was rather short but it still fit pretty well. I think if you added a change of POV every now and then, it would give us a little more in the story. I think there were some grammar things that needed to be fixed but I can't remember off the top of my head. If you could, I think it would be interesting to see a continuation of this series, like the backstory of Zara and Jake or an entire book about their kids? Just suggestion but I think it would be pretty cool. Thanks again and happy writing!

Need more...

I loved how you made some of the characters unlikeable and selfish in a way instead of making them the kind of characters everyone likes. I also loved the plotline and how you made it an entire series. Please write another series like this!

Well...

Um so I cried... But I see why you did that plot twist. Although it hurts, it was a really cool book. Good job!

Amazing 😁

Characters were kind of confusing to keep track of... Some grammar stuff needs to be fixed. Loved your plotline!