Valykyle

Nice!

OMG OMG OMG! You have so many interesting plot twists! It's so good! I honestly have no feedback besides going back and checking some grammar stuff. Good job! I'll be waiting for the next update! ;)

Congratulations!

Congrats on finishing the book! And thank you for recommending this to me! I loved the plotline! The recovery part was rather short but it still fit pretty well. I think if you added a change of POV every now and then, it would give us a little more in the story. I think there were some grammar things that needed to be fixed but I can't remember off the top of my head. If you could, I think it would be interesting to see a continuation of this series, like the backstory of Zara and Jake or an entire book about their kids? Just suggestion but I think it would be pretty cool. Thanks again and happy writing!

Need more...

I loved how you made some of the characters unlikeable and selfish in a way instead of making them the kind of characters everyone likes. I also loved the plotline and how you made it an entire series. Please write another series like this!

Well...

Um so I cried... But I see why you did that plot twist. Although it hurts, it was a really cool book. Good job!

Awesome

Omg this was amazing! Literally no words for this! Good job!

Amazing 😁

Characters were kind of confusing to keep track of... Some grammar stuff needs to be fixed. Loved your plotline!