Vamp_Life

Hey to whoever is reading this! I'm a 14 year old girl and I love reading and writing! BTW I'm hella weird. Just saying so you know... I've also got Wattpad @furdeath

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LOVE IT

this story is amazing!! I love it!! i'm only halfway through but I am fully in love with it!!
The only problem is the grammar but that's it. the story is compelling and intriguing and i just can't have enough of it!

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interesting...

so far i'm only on the 3rd chapter, but i feel like the rest will live up to everything.
so this story is interesting and i like that the main characters know each other, usually, in a story like this, people will make it so one of them is new to the pack or something like that, but you made it different.
and to be honest i hate the cliche stories when someone is new and other crap like that. I really appreciate that you made it different, good job.
and about the text... when someone new is speaking make it in a new paragraph, please, it's sometimes vey confusing....
but overall i love the story, mostly because it's different from the others.

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I like it

Honestly, I just love poetry and it always feels like it can connect with the readers easier, but only if you do it right, and that's exactly what you did. You wrote it right and I want to read the actual story of those 2 lovers.
But there is1 minus, it's very vague, not in a way that you don't get any info at all, no. But in a way that I don't understand who they were to each other, maybe it's just me, idk, but I'd like to know more about their past...
Overall, the poetry is good,didn't see any mistakes there, and it's interesting.
Keep up the good work and good luck with everything!

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I want more...

I really feel the emotional pain of the protagonist, it's so well written and i really do want to continue reading this, but sadly there are no more chapters...
pls update... you can't leave me hanging like this!!
but overall i love this and can't wait for more!

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NEED. ANSWERS. NOW.

k so i haven't read a lot but... WOW OMG I NEED ANSWERS HOW ARE PRISCILLA AND VIVIEN RELATED???!!! LIKE WHAT?? WTF?!
So about that... I don't understand how those two relate (probably because I didn't read much but I NEED to let people know what an amazing book this is...) and I am very curious how everything will unfold because I'm hooked.
no but I do need answers... i'll continue reading and whoever is reading this read the book... READ IT

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love it

This book truly is captivating and interesting. I'm just speechless at how amazing this is...
all I'm gonna say is you MUST read it if you haven't.

Good job, Author.

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Captivating

The author of this masterpiece definitely has a bright future as an author. 100% sure of that. The way everything is described and told just makes you want to be able to do that yourself, it makes you want to continue reading this, and I just can't get enough of it, I can't get enough of the writing style and perfect description.
Dear Author, I love this. I love the description, the style, and the story itself. Keep up the good work.
Have a great day.

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LOVE. THIS.

THIS IS THE BEST FUCKING STORY I'VE EVER READ!!!! IF YOU DON'T READ IT YOU ARE AN IDIOT!!!
first off i wanna say how intriguing and captivating this story is. it just sucks you in and doesn't let you go even after you are done with it. there are just so many unanswered questions that will make you think and question whether or not ther is a secret meaning to anything.... or i'm just an idiot and i'm overthinking a lot....
but still, this is the best story i've ever read. and i can't wait for the next update and i most certainly can't wait to get all t he answers!!!
keep up the good work and good luck with everything!!1!

edit: i forgot to say about how well everything is described. it's just-wow...

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The Gems of Blood

This story is very interesting and intriguing. From the very beginning you get questions for which you'll have to wait to get an answer.
I'd suggest being a little less descriptive and adding at least some conversations or thoughts of the mc, and I know that there is just 1 chapter, I'm saying that because if in the future the story will continue going like that then we, the readers, won't bond with the mc at all. Add, if you haven't, Selena's thoughts, and give us an idea about how she looks.

Good luck with the story, I love it so far.

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An intriguing story.

I am in love with this! I am so into the story that right now I’m overthinking everything.
This is very deep and, in my opinion, very well constructed.
This story can make you think and overthink everything you read. This story WILL make you think about the meaning behind the words... behind actions...

Honestly I really am in love with this and I can’t wait for the next update.
I recommend Zoi to everyone because this is a masterpiece!

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