Ashley S

Hello, I am a writer who aspires to be an author someday. I love writing and am always trying to improve my stories and style.

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Vampchick

When I read the first chapter I thought this might end up having a darker turn to it. But as I read more and more about them through the years from her birth until the end when they are old and gray. I came to understand that all it was was they didn't understand enough. They saved their first times for each other but no one made sure they knew what they were doing for that first time. I loved how she slowly tested him after choosing to talk to him. She wanted to make sure he would really stop when she needed him too. Once she had that level of trust back, I could see how they were able to slowly make it work again. I have to admit that how it ended is amazing. They loved each other a lot and despite misjudging a lot of things on both sides, that love remained strong even after he was gone from the world. Thank you for writing such an amazing story.

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vampchick

I love this story, I do hope that Casius will be truthful with Adam about Frank. If he knew his dad was causing the one he loves so much pain then maybe he could help. I am looking forward to seeing what happens next. Each chapter draws me into the story more and more.

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Vampchick

This is a great series. I love how each one goes with the others. All of them are amazing characters. It is hard to pick a favorite because I love them all so much. I do have a soft spot for the only gay couple so far in their family, though. They are just so adorable together. I am looking forward to book 14 when you make it. This world you have made is truly amazing.

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Vampchick

This was a great story. I love that Cay was her true mate. I hope Nix finds his mate because he deserves it. This book was definitely full of strong independent spirit and showing that change is not a bad thing. I love how you had dire wolves in this story. I know they are the more violent type of wolf based on how temperamental they are but overall they are the most beautiful and amazing wolves in the werewolf world.

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Vampchick

I love this story. It was pulling at so many emotions. I would love to see an epilogue if one is planned for it. I am curious to what their wedding is going to be like. Honestly epilogue added or not. this was a good story.

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Vampchick

I am really enjoying this story. I read sum of us first and now reading this from a different view is really fun. I have a feeling there is at least some sort of chemistry between Taylor and Chelsea. I am curious on if they will act on it or not.

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Vampchick

This is amazing so far. I love how the stone family keeps going for their maids. I have read the first two books and I am looking forward to reading what happens in this one.

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Vampchick

I read both of the books concerning Kyle in one day. They were so good that I couldn't stop reading until I was done every chapter. This was really good. I can't wait to look into your other stories now that I have read these ones.

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vampchick

This is an amazing and heartbreaking story. I feel so bad for what happened to Danica. She made it through so much hell only to die when her children are 18 and 16. I hope Ryder wakes up. I am looking forward to seeing how this ends. I hope nothing bad has happened to Anna.

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Vampchick

I am glad that Marcus wants to ask Gracie out. Awww I hope they still get a chance even though she is his boss. Things are never easy. I was so proud of Marcus for telling Bee off. She had not right to do what she did. After 12 years to try and change her ways, she is still a horrible person for Marcus when it comes to dating. I love this story it brings so many emotions.

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vampchick

I love this whole series. I am looking forward to the next book as well. I am eager to read the two epilogues. The way you write these stories, they make me cry, laugh, and feel so many emotions depending on the chapter. I am a fan of this series and honestly your writing is so amazing. I wish I could bring this kind of emotion into my own writing.

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Vampchick

I finished reading salty today and just started this one. I love your stories that I have read so far. This one is making me so excited to see a chance for Mikah and Hallie to get their happy ending like Sloan has hers.

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vampchick

This is an amazing story. I read the original version first but I have to admit this rewrite is making it even more amazing. The details and backstory that is able to be made now is making me eager to read more. I am looking forward to seeing what happens next.

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Vampchick

This is truly amazing writing. I can see that in the twin's defense they do care about her. She is more than just a doll to them. As for how they show it, it is not the right way but I can see they are changing too now that she is back in their lives. They have some deep issues and I think that Elise is their light to guide them from their dark past. I am looking forward to when the next chapter comes out. I love the story so far, dark stories can reveal the most amazing endings sometimes.

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Vampchick

I like how it is going. I am looking forward to seeing the next update.

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VampChick

I love how this is written. I feel so bad for Wren. I hope things work into his favor again because he deserves happiness too. I don't know if the king is truly happy with his wife. Yes she gave him a son but something feels off in how she behaves. She is very bitter at times.

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