Vanessa Ryker

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Well done

Couldn't put this story down. Felt a little short, the chapters could have been longer. A good read.

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Great Writing, Interesting Read

I agree with the review from Emmanuel. I am also really enjoying the writing style, the way the main characters thoughts are put onto page. This is not atypical werewolf story so far, so I like that. Lots of errors but easy to fix. Thank you for writing this, if I could give more stars for your writing style, I would.

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Love Love Love

This book had two good reviews so I thought I'd give it a go. Not really my cup of tea, I thought, boy was I wrong. A must read. It's sexy and funny and enjoyable. I couldn't put it down. It is well written, and I fell in love with Stoic. Didn't want know to, but hard not to. Disappointed it's over.

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5 stars!

Story was fast paced and interesting. Really enjoyable

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Well Written

Well crafted story leaving you wanting more. Damon is sexy and you fall in love with him and his love for Emma.

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Luna Graced

Well written with interesting plot. So far so good. Looking forward to the rest

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Short and Sweet

Short and Sweet. Perfectly executed. A must read. Very happy reader. Only recommend a point of view for whoever is narrating.

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Addictive

Addictive. Hard to put down. Well written. This is one of the books that needs more promotion, it's well written and and actually deserves it's rating. Highly recommend.

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A must read

I've not finished the first chapter and it's already got me hooked. Well written, makes you smile, a must read

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A hidden gen

"Hellbound," is a love story with a different angle, it is interesting and steamy. A must read. This book is one of those needles in a haystack.

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Another One

Mia Kerr at her best again. Thanks for writing

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The Ones Who Failed Us

This is a story about love. Not a story in the sense of romantic love, but the love of family. The main character goes through a traumatic experience that is not her fault. Mistakes are made, anger is given, but the love of family rules through. Trust is hard to earn, and Ava, the main character- grows and learns through her experience. A story hard to put down and well written. Thank you author for writing this. I enjoyed your book.

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Moving

I previously started reading this book last year but stopped. After realising why it's because this story is sad. Heartbreakingly so. I cried. I curled into a ball reading it. This story us powerful and moving. Get a box of tissues because you're going to need it.

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Interesting

The plot is different and interesting.

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Worth the wait.

Worth the wait, I hung on to every update, and happy it is complete. A great read from start to end.

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A short taster

This story is well written, however am hoping there is another book? More to read? Be continued? Please? Seriously, it's that good.

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So good

Why, why, why? You know books you can't put down and don't want to stop? This is one of them. Hot, plausible story that gets you going. Step-siblings have tense emotions for each other which cracks when their parents go away- read for more!

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Masterful

Kesha D Ely has a way of writing where you are pulled into the story, living and breathing with the character. She has a different, explicit writing style that screams knowledge and meaning behind what she is writing. This story has a unique take with a ballerina and American history aspect that is intriguing for someone not American and white.

This story is interesting and if this style of writing suits you, you will thoroughly enjoy it. Thank you Kesha for writing this. You are talented.

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A hidden Gem

This book deserves every star it gets. It is well written with a good plot. You'll fall in love with the main couple. This book is one easily missed under all the dirt, but it's easily one of the best reads you'll find. Needs spelling work but it's not bad enough to want to hang your head against the wall.

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Better than Good

Tigerlillie60 has a great writing style. This is the third book of hers I have read. This story is enticing, interesting and makes you wanting more. She does however need to work on her spelling and grammar. Homophone words are scattered throughout the story and needs rereading, but you can ignore that, most of the time, if you have patients (pun intended- this is how it is spelt in the book).

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Okay

Interesting storyline. Author needs to reread not spell check- omitted words, changes in characters names, words spelt correctly but wrong context, e.g . Author writes patients for patience as one example. High potential just needs a thorough edit.

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Quick but good

Good story. Punctuation was confusing though when characters were talking. Not sure who was talking by use of punctuation and lack of paragraphing to note the changes.

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Okay

Good story but grammatical errors and spelling is poor. Needs rereading and proofing but has potential

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Great Story

Lexi runs away from her abusive husband. She starts over, will she find her strength? This story is well worth the read. It needs a spelling check but easy to read. Enjoyable.

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Soulful

Not a book for the faint-hearted. There are open wounds in this book. You read it as if you are speaking the thoughts of the character. This book demonstrates the fine line we humans, we girls walk in every day.

Well written, but not for all.

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High School Crush Twist

Amelia leaves town straight out of high school to make a new life. Not the most popular if girls, but she's strong. Returning home one Christmas she crashes her car, to be rescued by the only one who stood up for her during this time. Hot sexy Cade. Steamy scenes ahead, enjoyable to read.

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Read in one sitting

Fear. What would you do if your mate was the bad boy? Scared of rejection Bria buys herself some time, fear is holding her back. Will he want her? This is a really good story. A bit quick for me, I enjoyed the characters and Rhett is a hottie. I wish the story went longer, it was so good I didn't want it to end.

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Romantic read

A romantic story which makes you go awe, in a good way! Girl gets pregnant and 8 years later the dad comes back into her life. Meanwhile his mum likes to gossip and even though she's a dumb as she's out to get girl. Author acknowledges it needs editing, and although there are errors, including omitted words, the mistakes are easy to ignore and don't want to make you bang your head against the wall. Lots of promise and recommend it. Nice to read a simple romantic story, I'm excited about what will happen next!

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Put your prejudice aside and read this book

A girl cuts ties from a disastrous relationship and moves across the country. There she meets a sexy hot male with a questionable profession. You know what they say- one way to get over a man is to get under another! A really enjoyable story, steamy, raunchy and leaves you wanting more. Dominic is sexy as and you will fall in love... or at least get a bit wet!

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Unwanted

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This is a story of unrequited love. The female main character realises her situation and when she tries to get out, everything she wanted and hoped happens. A short and sweet erotic romance story. Has potential for a larger, longer story.

Okay. The reason for my first review was the spelling was doing my head in. The spelling is questionable- as in- you question your own knowledge of the spelling of some words and want to get a dictionary out because you're thinking- is that word really spelt that way? Advice" IGNORE the spelling, and you'll enjoy the story.

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Hidden Gem

This story is interesting and exciting and am so glad I stumbled on it. A worthwhile read. Thank you for writing this!!

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Great story with promising potential

This story has a really interesting plot and storyline. It needs a few tweaks in terms of grammar, punctuation, spelling, etc, so you need to ignore them to read it BUT, this story is full of potential and promise and with editing it will be on fire! Great story.

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Enjoyabke

This novel is well written and interesting. The main character goes into awful situations which are forced on her, however, because of her, changes are made. Recommend!

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Loved Loved

I read the first book, which was gutwenching. This story empowers the main character. She is strong. I recommend.

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Emotional

This book makes me sad, not because it's poorly written or bad, this story is neither of those things. But it makes me feel emotionally sad. I cry with the character and feel her burden. The style of writing is so strong, one not for everyone. If you want to cry read this. This story is not for all. I'm hoping the main character grows stronger.

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Well written and Worth Your Time

This story is well written with an interesting and different plot. Chapters are exciting and make it hard to put down. Highly recommend.

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Read this Story!

Well written with a unique story of the werewolf world. Some errors but minimal. This story is a must read. Highly recommend

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Interesting Story

This story moves quickly, is interesting and catches your interest. There are unfortunately many, many spelling errors which need to be fixed, in every chapter. Punctuation, tense and grammar are good, just the spelling.

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Highly Recommend

Well written with interesting story line. Can't wait to complete it.

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Don't Hold Back

Interesting plot with great characters. Easy to read. Highly recommend

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Great story let down by spelling grammar and punctuation

This story has a lot of promise, with a unique story to tell.

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One of the best stories out there

I didn't think I'd like this book at first, but I am in love with it. Well written and great characters. Thank you author for writing it!!

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Sad it's not finished

Well written and interesting story. Unhappy it's not complete but guess that makes the want more. Can't wait to read the whole story! Thank you author!

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Wow

This story is quick which takes you on an intense ride over the period of a few days. The characters are masterfully created and the story is well written. I did notice a word error which is easily missed as one can imagine the author pouring her/ his (sorry) ideas down in quick fashion. Well written and a must read. Thank you Raven for writing this story.

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Not happy this is it...

I have really enjoyed this story and as it is not a generic topic, makes it vastly more interesting. Yeah there were a couple of errors at most, but it is very well written. I'm unhappy though as I don't want the story to end!!

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Good Story

An interesting story however like other reviews, the story needs editing with spelling, grammar, tense and punctuation errors. Other than that, has potential

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