Vanessa Hawk

Hello all🙂 I'm just a 27 year old who loves to write, have since I was a little kid. I hope my stories captivate you and keep bringing you back for more. Enjoy!❤

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Great work

The beginning of this story really caught my attention. It starts off on a really bad note, and when you think it might get better, it gets worse, but that is the best thing about this book. Ups and downs are what keep people coming back, I know I definitely have.

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Loving it

I actually really love this. I could be wrong, but Brax seems like he has a softer side of him that he's afraid to let show since he's all about being a dom. But i also think he's actually starting to care about her a little since he worries about having overreacted. I feel bad for her but I also think subconsciously she enjoys it which is why she hasn't run away. Less out of fear more because she kind of doesn't really want to leave.

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Hot and steamy

I really enjoyed it. I actually like the ending a lot. I so wish there was some indication Tony was into him since before but didn't act on it because he was too young, it would fill a plot hole as its so random that Tony just fucks him out of the blue. But i did like it a lot and I think the description of everything that was going on was well done.

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