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Work hard for your happily ever after! And Live the life that people write novels about.

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Great

It was actually fantastic. I was looking for something a bit longer but it held detail and description that was much needed. I enjoy how they give the height for each and every character that was mentioned. I enjoy the swear language and threats because who doesn't love drama. I am very intrigued by how this story will playoff. Hopefully, it is all good. I would really enjoy getting to know the reason behind the plot. I would love to meet the other character who owns the biggest pack. Sorry if I didn't remember all of the names. Oh, and I hope u understand what I am saying because u said that English isn't ur first language. (I speak Spanish) If u like I can translate it into Spanish to see if u understand any better. Have a great day.

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Amazing!!

I love everything about it and I really enjoyed the character personalities. I love the way Chase acts. He is very open and kind in a way. He doesn't want anyone to hurt his girl and he doesn't know it yet but he likes her. He doesn't know what love is mainly because he has never loved before. He thinks he is a big tough monster who doesn't have one care in the world but that is all a cover-up. He is actually protective and really kind. I believe the writer had a fun time writing this story and I can see the process it can make. Amy is a shy and hurt girl. She believes that no one will ever truly love her because her first love was a jerk and he didn't really love her. She has never felt real love before so I think they are perfect together. Minor grammar problems mainly not placing commas

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COULDN"T BE BETTER

Hell, if u are interested in plot twists and drama you came to the right place. I swear this book has me on the edge of my bed. In some chapters, you just wanna slam your laptop shut and if u are like me then you slam the laptop shut and scream into the nearest pillow. Just a tip *ANTHONY CAN BE A DICK*
But after a while, u get to understand why he is the way he is. It isn't because he wants to be like that- well sometimes yes but most of the time no. lol. OH, AND the romance, drama, thriller, adventure, a mental breakdown will get u screaming. If you enjoy a good story this is the right story for you. I love the way the writer writes and the way u can feel the characters. I can definitely see this happening in real life.

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Nice!

I think that the story is really nice. I encourage you to keep working on it. There were minor spelling errors but it wasn't anything too big. I appreciate your explanations on the school and vampires. It really helped me to understand what your story is about. I think it could have been longer but that's just my opinion. Please keep up the good work and never let anyone tell u otherwise. If you have a talent you gotta show the world. I noticed that your cover isn't very attractive so I want to help. I can try and make some covers for you and u can maybe choose one that u like. I hope I can be of service. ANyways have a great day and keep writing.

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Awesome!!

I so far am relishing it a lot. The scheme is awesome. I don't absolutely enjoy stories that aren't Pov but it is nice. This way I get to discover everyone's' thoughts and emotions. It is truly something to live for. Additionally, I am cherishing the ROMANCE that turned into DRAMA extremely quickly. This tale is exactly something that I admire. It has almost all of my favorite genres. (Romance, Drama, Fantasy) So if u like any of those genres this book is something you would love to read. *I swear the drama is good enough to make me stay up until 1 in the morning and slam my laptop close. *The romance is also very great! The sparks were just flying with (Victory and ???) I won't say her lover's name because u should find out for urself. Also Idk if I said this before but I love drama. And a quick tip to other drama lovers out there; drama follows after love. Lady Rowan, u did a great job with this novel.

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Awesome!

I loved it! I am so thankful and grateful that I read it. Now I have something to look forward to in the future. I say that you should just keep on writing and never give up. You are talented and talented people do great things with the right support of course. Just know if you ever need me to cheer you up I will be here. Also, I know I said this in the comments but I am loving the characters and the details. It is just perfect. I won't lie to you so I will say there are minor grammar mistakes but that is understandable so have a fantastic day/night. I recommend this story to anyone who loves new writers and romance. You have a bright and beautiful future planned for you so keep working hard and you will not be disappointed.

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Fantastic

I loved this book. It was very interesting and the best thing is that it didn't take long to read. I read it in only 3 days and that was fast even for me. I am honest so I will just say that the only problem was, in the beginning, there was very bad detailing. That stopped however when the romance stepped in. The plot was fantastic and I can say the same about the twists. Spoiler alert I didn't expect Gabriel to be evil. JK He was only like that cause he was working undercover in an agency... Ohh sadly I didn't figure out what happened to Kim and Zander. I should say that I thought he was evil but I
guess not.

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forever more

Wow, this book has me hooked and I haven't even read that many chapters but the suspense and the characters are just amazing. Keep up the good work and I promise you won't be disappointed. Also, the fact that you came to me personally and asked for support actually made me feel great about myself.

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Vampire's Pet Review

This book is so great and if i was to be honest it even made me cry and that was just amazing. The plot was awesome and just so one of a kind. And the romance wasn't any expected love; it just took it's time and i would have never guessed they would end up dating if not for the romance genre. And also since i loved this story so much i have decided to name my first child after one of the main characters and there will be no stopping me. I just love this name and the story that i am going to read the 2 book to it. The only thing i didn't like was the punctuation but after a while you get used to it so don't pay too much attention to that.

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