Veladino

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We are what remain

The plot was a lot loose for me. Things felt like they just happened without any prior reason and it got me wondering if the author intentionally wrote it in that manner.

Character development was also lacking greatly. The narrator of the story, Dani's character needed a lot of work. Even though she was 18 years old and was an adult by all means, her character couldn't quite merge with her age. In my mind, she was a 15 year old. I feel her brothers' characters were more developed and I could easily picture them. For others asides she and them, they felt void.

I believe the author is still an amateur writer and if that's the case, they wrote fairly well. They, however, still have a long journey ahead of them.

TO THE AUTHOR: Keep writing and someday your books would be among the best in your lifetime!

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