We are what remain
The plot was a lot loose for me. Things felt like they just happened without any prior reason and it got me wondering if the author intentionally wrote it in that manner.
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Character development was also lacking greatly. The narrator of the story, Dani's character needed a lot of work. Even though she was 18 years old and was an adult by all means, her character couldn't quite merge with her age. In my mind, she was a 15 year old. I feel her brothers' characters were more developed and I could easily picture them. For others asides she and them, they felt void.
I believe the author is still an amateur writer and if that's the case, they wrote fairly well. They, however, still have a long journey ahead of them.
TO THE AUTHOR: Keep writing and someday your books would be among the best in your lifetime!