Venus

Unraveling fantasies

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Disturbingly obsessive

It was hard for me to keep on reading at first giving the nature of their “relationship”. However the story is so interesting and twisted I forced myself to keep on going. The storytelling is addictive, the characters are unique and I loved particularly Jane being so real. It’s an amazing story about obsession and unhealthy relationships.

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Just perfect

I began reading Zane and El’s book with the same disposition I have for most Inkitt stories: pure black and white. In which you have the perfect couple and the rest are just mean second characters with bad and lame intentions that at the end have a dumb reasoning behind them (and quite frankly not very realistic). However this author changed that, and by the moment I read half the book I realized I had gotten myself in something completely different. Now reading this book, with one of my fav characters (Sofia) I como to solidified my opinion. These books are something else... they are mature. There’s no more black and whites. The characters, their feelings and actions are complex just like real people. These books are not just about love and hate. You get all these different emotions, and you just can’t stop reading. There’s no picking sides, no admonishing wrong actions and definitely no lame, stupid and unrealistic plots. Everything feels real and true. Writer, these books are just amazing.

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Finally

You deserve nothing less than a five star rating. Why? Because it was goddamn time to find healthy relationships in erotica books on Inkitt. I loved this couple since they were flawed and still perfect. Loved the twist in your story and the awesome characterization.

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OMG

I’m only gonna say that this broke my heart.

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Stab to my heart

Damn... I didn’t know I’d like the story the way I did. I completely frown upon their relationship, not because of the age gap but because of the period of their lives they are living it’s just so different. However, I must say I cried at the end. I rotted for Stella and Levi. They are definitely my favourite characters from all your books I’ve read. Dunno they just felt so real, and I understood every single choice they made, which speaks a lot about your writing skills. Keep it up. I’m gonna start the 2nd now.

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Two things

1. This is like Sons of Anarchy but a hundred times better.
2. I really thought Vik and Lysa were it for me, that a better story than them’s was impossible. But damn.

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LOVED IT

I LOVED IT! You had me on edge all the time. Some chapters got my heart racing excitedly. Everything flows so naturally and the badass female characters are a huuuge bonus!

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Absolutely perfect

The erotica? Excellent (specially the lesbian sex, and I'm not even lesbian).
The plot? I wasn't expecting anything that happened, totally caught me off guard all the time.
The characters? I loved every single one of them, especially Sarah.
The writing? It was just so natural, so good.
I'm no expert, but this story is in my top 5

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Could be better

A believe you are a very good writer. You have your own style and you stay true to it. Also your descriptions are very very good. However the plots and characters repeated in each story, and it felt quite boring at the end.

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OMG

Omg....
First of all, your writing is amazing. Despite having many chapters for my personal liking(and I almost didn’t read it for that reason) you got me hooked on this book for two days like it was meth. I even had to sneak during work hours to finish it. Your writing skills are awesome, your storytelling flows naturally. Excellent.
There was just one thing that bothered me while reading: all the love confessions. Every time someone said “I love you” I couldn’t manage to understand why (specially with Ethan), because there was not enough evidence for me to make it believable, like I needed more insights in relationships besides sex to gasp and get surprised at those parts. I would have loved more moments of building up the romance in the different couples. Not only in romantic relationships though, between Kitty and Jason, Anne and Jason, Jason and Ethan, Tara and her mom, Tara’s past etc.
However, I don’t want you to take this bad since you completely deserve a 5star overall rating.
Keep writing please!
SPOILER ALERT
I was fucking THRILLED with the end. I loved it. I loved how Tara stood up for herself. Fuck u Jason.
XOXO

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Perfect!!!

You wrote such a great story, I finished it within the day since I couldn’t stop myself from reading. I loved that Violet was so independent and Derek so warm, breaking with the cliches of the tough fighter guy that can’t control his anger. I loved everything of it. Congratulations!

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