Read the story now
First of all, your writing is amazing. Despite having many chapters for my personal liking(and I almost didn’t read it for that reason) you got me hooked on this book for two days like it was meth. I even had to sneak during work hours to finish it. Your writing skills are awesome, your storytelling flows naturally. Excellent.
There was just one thing that bothered me while reading: all the love confessions. Every time someone said “I love you” I couldn’t manage to understand why (specially with Ethan), because there was not enough evidence for me to make it believable, like I needed more insights in relationships besides sex to gasp and get surprised at those parts. I would have loved more moments of building up the romance in the different couples. Not only in romantic relationships though, between Kitty and Jason, Anne and Jason, Jason and Ethan, Tara and her mom, Tara’s past etc.
However, I don’t want you to take this bad since you completely deserve a 5star overall rating.
Keep writing please!
I was fucking THRILLED with the end. I loved it. I loved how Tara stood up for herself. Fuck u Jason.