V. A. Maningo

Iloilo

Just another amateur student-author who loves to read Romance, Fantasy, VRMMO—literally anything that befalls under Young Adult stories and an avid fan of procastination. Sorry, not sorry.

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Intriguing and beautiful.

I like the plot. How it revolves in different characters, though I get confused at times, the book itself is a big thumbs up. The names are intricate and exotic, gives me the middle-east feels.
In my honest opinion, the book might need more editing and proofreading and maybe a little more description towards the speaker's feelings.
Nevertheless, thank you for this masterpiece! The idea and portrayal really tweaks with my imagination. Maybe someday, it might be published as a novel but until then, I hope the book continues to improve for everyone to read.

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