Vivianne Rozen

I began writing on nights and weekends while working as an intern for an international, iconic fashion magazine. After five years, I left that position as an editor. viviannerozen@gmail.com

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Intensity, and sweetness at the same time

The title caught my eye (my Avalon fiction reading started way back with The Mists of Avalon... borrowed from my mother!) and very happy I read this. Some work is undoubtedly necessary with the texts, minor edits, but it creates tension around you, and you begin to want to know the mystery which surrounds these timeless chronicles.

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Not always carefree and happy

My smile was fixed through most of these chapters. The four main characters were interesting and diverse, although somewhat typical, they still seduced this reader. The language serves a well-written story, The emotions follow each other and replace the previous ones in all simplicity, for our greatest pleasure.

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Fertile imagination

Okay, so reviewing an early draft is never easy; there's always pacing issues, characters that we need more time with, and concerns with grammar at this stage seem trite... but necessary, I think. So, with all this in mind, I found the atmosphere is strong, what the writer borrows from the genre is telling and astute, and we are lulled by the sound of the author's voice, which is an accomplishment at this early stage. Let's see!

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Effective writing

Lena is a strong and well written character and the reader is easily carried away. If you are looking for an easy read this text is not for you! To the more intrepid of you, welcome to a universe both black and fantastic!

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The story keeps us in suspense

Writing in a simple style but without awkwardness, fluid, that does not try to do too much, that does not need to. Full of meaning, the author manages to create a positive story despite the strong environmental message.

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