Roses are red, violets are blue, 'Shattered' was great, and so are you.
Sorry for the overly dramatic title, but I couldn't think of anything else. Ignoring that, The summary was what intrigued me, but the first chapter had me addicted to reading this story from start to finish.
To add on to that, the first part was what made me interested in this story, with the mother-daughter relationship between Snow White and Vanessa. Snow's friendship with Liam and Rose Red was good too, and it was amazing to see how close the trio remained, even up to end. Plus, I liked how Liam and Snow White addressed the typical tropes seen in fairy tales and other stories (when they first meet that is).
As Snow White ages, I still enjoyed the story. It was good-the fall from grace and Snow White getting to know the dwarves and their lives, and I like the twist about Rose Red being a werewolf. To be honest, that last bit reminded me of the television show 'Once Upon a Time' on the ABC channel, as it had a mixture of characters from Disney-related works (and one of the main characters included Snow White). Admittedly, the story did seem predictable once the mirrors had been found.
As for the end, I did have a qualm with Vanessa surviving and going into exile (I had a preconceived notion that Vanessa would die and Snow would give her a private funeral, but maybe that's too cliche), and Liam and Rose Red marrying and Chaster's proposal to Snow/Beatrix did make me tilt my head (another preconceived notion I took from the actual tale, and and I thought that was what the story was initially going for), but after finish reading, I was fine with it. Other than that, I did like how everyone's story wrapped up, and I thought the last few lines were perfect for the story.
Overall, I did enjoy the story. It almost cinematic feel to it, and it has great characterizations and a good story that puts a new perspective on the old fairy tale that I'm sure everyone will enjoy.
-W.S.
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