It's on the way there, just needs polishing
I can't judge this as a full novel because it isn't finished, however I can judge it on what it is now.
Read the story now
This book kind of reminds me of an anime, the potent action scenes, the snarky and out there remarks, the high praising and the many other scenes that come the first 4 chapters. This series has made me interested in it to say the least. What I find most interesting is how the main character Herah even though she's more than within the realm of being incredibly powerful (Mary Sue-ish if you will), but how she interacts with others is what I find I am most interested in.
That all being said I have a few complaints, the action scenes were a bit hard to follow, the main character does seem to be a bit too powerful for her own good but I chalk that up to the story not being finished, and the grammar on here needs work, but another person went through a lot of the complaints I originally had so this list is short to say the least.
All in all you got potential for this story, keep going with it and I'll be reading every chapter. As for now I will leave my review as is due to the fact that it's not finished, but for now not too bad.
P.S. Sorry for the late review.