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Good, very good.

While something like this wouldn't be my cup of tea, usually but I can make an exception for this. What I loved the most was the bond of the sisters, you could really feel how much they loved each other and the world that was created within the story, which reminded me of Alice in Wonderland, it is overall well built and thorough in its description. While I see a few people making complaint of the punctuation and grammar, I didn't see a lot of issues though. The first few chapters a bit slow but it ramps up as time goes on. Overall I enjoyed the book as a whole and I plan on reading the sequel to this, which I plan to put in my reading list.

P.S. Sorry for the late review.

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