C.H.H

No published stories yet

Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

MY two cents

The beginning was a bit slow, but once we got to the ascension things became very interesting.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

I like it.

The words and story flows well. There is no errors breaking the pacing, and it left me wondering.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

My review

Overall a good story. The narrative is nice. I would work a bit more on the description and writing style. The story lacks a bit in the regards of trying to capture the moments on paper. The voices of the characters come out in a clear and lively way. There is at times, as mentioned earlier, when I feel like the book ain’t capturing the mood.

But I'm not a big sucker for romance novels so what do I know.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

A good story

Overall a good story. I like the narrative. The main characters voice comes out in a wonderful way. There is a lot of good points in the story, but I would work a bit more on the descriptions, and writing style.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

What is there not to like

I am a huge fan of fantasy, and so this is a good fit for me.

I love your writing style. It keeps me engaged and doesn’t bore. The overall story is beautiful. There are some small issues, like how she looks, and her state of mind that would be nice to know. But other than that, a great job. I don’t like how you capitalize words in a sentence. Example: YOU TOUCH ME AGAIN. A simple ‘!’ would be enough for me. Chapter eight feels like it has some purple prose in it.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Nice

Has some issues, but that's ok.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Good

The prologue really left a lot of questions that needs answers.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

I'm a bit picky

Good story overall. Rich man who can do whatever he wants.

But all the errors breaks the pacing.

Read the story now

No badges received yet

About Us

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered publisher, providing a platform to discover hidden talents and turn them into globally successful authors. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books our readers love most on our sister app, GALATEA and other formats.