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Revolution

This story as great potential, it's not something I would usually read but the blurb and prologue were quite intriguing. I think that Chapter 1 and 2 are missing something though, perhaps add some small breadcrumbs of Ruelle's backstory to help understand her actions and emotions a little better. Also, be careful of your grammar and pacing, they are both a little off but should be easy enough to fix. Keep it up!

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