Will Solomon

Winterfell

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A pleasant read

A good casual story with a decent plot. The twist at the end was definitely unexpected, but believable. The diction was good and overall; the story was easy to follow with relatable characters and situations. Critique wise, I advise a thorough edit, especially for properly punctuating dialogue tags, and there are a lot of words that are not either capitalized or synonyms used improperly, all of which are very easy fixes. I enjoyed this read and I wish you luck with your future endeavors!

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If you're a hero/villain lover than this is a must

Alright so from what I've gathered the story is pretty much divided into several "arcs" that span across 105 chapters. In order to beat understand the novel one must completely immerse themselves in it to get the best understanding of the plot and the diverse characters that are introduced. Overall, it was a pleasant read and one can tell much thought and passion was put into this work.

Keep on keeping on Grant.

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Horror fans willl love this! Not for the faint of heart!

Alright, I was hooked on this story by the first few chapters, even up to the first six I think. It has a fantasy mix with a bit of non-fiction that really deals with mental health disorders and how they affect people. Plot was okay, but didn't really start rolling until like the last two chapters so far. Make sure on dialogue tags, you're punctuating correctly, for example: "How often do you shower around here?" She responded sarcastically. When tag should be, she responded sarcastically. Just some basic stuff. But overall, I really enjoyed your story especially with the demon that the woman supposedly sees that torments her. It makes us question alot of things.

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Great Story

I enjoyed the easy going plot and the cliffhangers the author left after each chapter! The suspense was good too and dialogue between each character was very natural as well as interactions. Just a few typos I noticed that are all easy fixes! But overall great story!

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Compelling!

I for one, love dark and gruesome poetry. I'm a fan of Edgar Allen Poe so this reminds me a lot of his poems and stories like The Raven and House of Usher. I think it flows really well and I the cliffhanger at the last chapter just wants me wanting and more!

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