Will Solomon

Winterfell

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Intriguing and Ominous

The author has clearly shown he has put much effort into plot lines, editing, and world-building. What especially impressed me was the great use of diction and vocabulary. It reminded me a lot of Game of Thrones in some ways especially the writing style which I base my own style off of. In the future, I would suggest shortening chapter-length 1000-1400 average or fewer. You have a lot of content to work with and I think it would be much more effective if dispersed evenly. Keep up the great work!

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Paradise Island

I think it's no secret that the author has great use of words especially when it comes to descriptions. Descriptions of the human body, facial features, etc. are vivid and on point. I can also tell the author definitely put some personal touch in this story. It gives me a warm, and light-hearted feeling with every chapter I read. I like the use of referring to things like Instagram, fairy OddParents, etc. that help us relate with the world.

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Compelling!

I for one, love dark and gruesome poetry. I'm a fan of Edgar Allen Poe so this reminds me a lot of his poems and stories like The Raven and House of Usher. I think it flows really well and I the cliffhanger at the last chapter just wants me wanting and more!

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