A great and gripping read
From the start this story had me hooked. The writing is intricately woven, a unique take on two varying points of view. Both sides of the character is kept interesting throughout the chapters. 'Her' is my favourite, she adds another side to this story which keeps the reader wanting to know more about what's happened to them. 'Me' the main narrative has good conflicts with the other side. All the characters are introduced well, and brought to life.
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Some chapters are shorter but that makes it an easier to read and keeps the story flowing nicely. Both punctuation and grammar are good. Only a few minor errors but that can easily be fixed with editing.
I would reccomend this story. Even the voices in my head agree. 🙃