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I’m a Dutch mom, finally having the guts to put my imagination on paper, well at least on screen. I hope you will like it!

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Intriguing

I read the first 23 chapters and I’m hooked! The chemistry between the main chapters is almost palpable and not always in a pleasant way, but always keeping the reader on its toes. I do hop that Derrick doesn’t change from bad boy too mister nice, for me it would ruin his whole personality (but maybe I’m just a sucker for real a..holes, in stories that is…😇)
Overall I would say, author please, please, please, keep those chapters coming!
And I really enjoy her/him replying to messages! That’s a definitely a mayor plus for me!❤️❤️❤️

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Unique

I read the first ‘story’, and I deliberately placed the word in quotation marks, and this isn’t meant as an attack or complaint dear author, but to me Hidden gem, and The Ticking leap can’t be read as separate stories. To me they’re two chapters of the same story.
That said, I'm very curious to see how the story will unfold!

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Unsettling

I've read the first couple of chapters and although it's well written, the story has a pretty unsettling storyline, but... I'm hooked and can't wait for the next chapters!

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Great story.

I have to admid, at a certain points I thought this was going to be another "bad boy goes good" story, but... without going into detail (spoilers!) I was pleasantly surprised with the how this story evolved!

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Love it!

There's not much to say then "I really love this story"!
If you like romance, than I'd advise this as a must read!❤️❤️❤️

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Read, if you’re in love with love.

I started of with the two previous stories, but this one is great. It contains drama, a pinch of violent action, and a lot of (unanswered) love/romance.

In this story the writer makes her main characters of flesh and blood. They make mistakes, have their fears and really come to life, to the point where you sometimes feel like you're kicking the male protagonist for the stupid things he does.

Sometimes the grammar is a little off, but it’s heartedly noticeable, so in other words, it didn’t bother me.

Dear author, keep on writing like this!

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chapt. 1 & 2

I really enjoyed the first two chapters., it really makes you interested in the two main characters and how their relationship will continue. You have a nice clear way of writing, so it makes it easy to envision what your character(s) are doing and where the scene is played out. Keep on going like this.

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