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return to fantasy
I very much like the twist at the end. What did the lizards live on? I keep wanting to know about them and if there are other animals around on the planet. I have lots of questions. I wonder if the lizards can communicate effectively with each other and what they might say.Read the story now
Alan; So good to see you haven't been idle in your retirement.
You paint a lovely picture of the mysterious land of peace. It does make me think how relaxed life would be in such a place.
The story flows well although I wondered why the candidates did not understand what a question was since they were asked if they understood the interview/three question approach. The question - answer routine must have been familiar to them. It's a tricky subject when I think about it. It is difficult to imagine not understanding what a question might be and also how to explain what questions are. I suppose you are right, if I lived for 900 years in a world of peace I would probably give up worrying, questioning or arguing with people. Just one 'to' instead of a 'too' near the start. I am very interested how you thought up the initial idea and then developed it.
Well done Alan. What will the next one be about?
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