Robert M Leonard

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Warriors and the Forbidden Castle

This seems like a good beginning to an epic adventure, but there are a lot of mistakes in grammar, punctuation, and spelling. A lot of shifting of tenses and Point of View which can be confusing. You have engaging characters here, and this could turn into an excellent story. But much work is needed to get the story to flow smoothly and evenly.

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