XaraNahara

Impressive!

I like your take on Imaginary friends. It was very dark and quite supernatural. I even liked when you went through a timeline of their transformation. I also liked how you didn't spell out exactly what they looked like because we were supposed to use our own imaginations to determine such things. I do wish that you would have elaborated on what exactly happened to that poor man as he was killed and whether people saw it or not. It isn't a big deal or anything, but I was just curious.

Pretty Funny

I like this story very much, but I feel like your story was hard to follow because it did not quite flow smoothly. There were parts where Teena was at home waking up Baby and then all of a sudden she was flying to someone's house to be the monster in a kid's nightmare. Then, she had to save another creature who was like her. I just feel like there could be some transition between these events. Other than that, the story was excellent. I do like Baby as well. He is a very funny and cute character. I would take him home with me.