Sarah Jordan

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Excited!

Interesting! Right off the bat I liked Thomas and I’m glad we get his POV. You describe the characters in a way where you don’t outwardly say their personality but you can draw conclusions about them based off of dialogue. If that made any sense.
I’m interested to learn more about Henry. Like is this going to be a love triangle situation or… idk I can’t wait to find out!
There isn’t much I can say about the plot since there’s only three chapters, but from the title I’m assuming it’s going to be about a wedding. I’m interested to see how it all ties together.
Can’t wait to get more chapters!

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Nice!

The first sentence had me hooked! I love the main chapter’s monologue and it had me really feel for Ari.
There’s some typos and missing punctuation, and the paragraphs are really long. What I do is make a separate paragraph every time a character speaks because it breaks up the dialogue and you won’t get confused over who’s speaking. This book seems to be switching between POVs but I couldn’t tell and had to reread it. If you put the characters name before each chapter in bold it’ll lessen any confusion.
Descriptions are great and detailed and I was able to picture the characters. All in all great job!

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I like Andy already

Great start! I can’t wait to see Chris and Andy’s characters develop throughout the story and I can’t wait for this love triangle to start. I do wish there was some character descriptions, especially Andy. What does he look like? Also why is Chris asking him out now? It seems that they have an interesting past together, did she always have a crush on him?
Aside from that this was a fun read! The characters already have a lot of personality. I can’t wait for Andy’s POV!

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Hi!

Hi I just have some quick thoughts! Since I don’t really know the plot, there isn’t much I can say about it. I do like the idea that the main character planned on unaliving themself but that leaves a lot of room for description which I didn’t have. I want to know what she was feeling when she wrote that note and left it taped to the door. What was going through her mind when the man kidnapped her? Did she really put up a fight or did she willingly give in because nothing can be worse than what she had planned?
When Eve was first mentioned I had no idea who that was. Maybe introduce Eve when the main character was going through some mental health issues. What was that side of her feeling?
Again I don’t know much since I only read the one chapter and this could be something that you plan on adding in later on in the story.

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Chefs kiss

I don’t normally read books with third person pov because it’s hard for me to connect to the main character(s) but that was not the case! From the first paragraph I was hooked and the author is talented to say the least.
This is so amazingly written. I can feel for Liam in the couple of chapters that I’ve read so far and I can picture everything happening as if I were watching a movie.
The author is very talented and the way they describe places, people, things, etc. is on another level, complex but still in layman’s terms. The descriptive details also didn’t take away from the story, it’s perfectly balanced.
*Chefs kiss*

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Yum

This genre is new for me but I’m invested. The characters have great voices and I love the dialogue. There were parts of the story I had to reread because I didn’t understand the scene change. Added descriptive details would fix that though. It’s steamy but not so overwhelming that it takes away from the plot which can be very difficult for authors so great job!

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Amazing

Love your writing style. I could picture everything as I read along. What I like the most aside from the plot, which is different and interesting in the best way, is that it’s told in Caleb’s pov. I haven’t read many books with a male MC that wasn’t a dual pov. Can’t wait to read more!

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