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Love Bites!

This is one of the best books I have read on Inkitt. I had a hard time putting the book down yesterday to meet day-to-day needs. This is because I was constantly on edge, wanting to know what would happen next. Especially when it came to Vanita and her 'master' plan, how Didi would fit in and I really wanted to know about Kumo. and their rivalry. My favorite part of the book is Didi's transformation (meaning the whole book really). Unlike some other books I have read, the heroine does not go from insecure to overly confident in just two paragraphs. We get to see her grow through all the challenges she faces.
Lenna and Ken are the best. Loved them way before they even became Didi's friends.
The end for me was kind of disappointing. Not because of the author's short comes. I just had expectations of my own which did not happen (Cal and Ethan)
Thank you @D. Remmi for the amazing read.
BTW. Fuck Prudence, who also happens to share a name with my entitled sister (I love my sister)

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HoneySweet

Yoh! Yoh! Yoh! The grammatical errors in this book are mind blowing. While reading Honey Sweet, I had to stop a lot of time, pushing the laptop aside just to breathe. Apart from using the wrong words and punctuation, the dialogue is extremely confusing. Sometimes I could not figure out who was talking. Mainly because the author did not use the correct dialogue writing rules such as a: when a new speaker talks then their dialogue should be written on a next line. I have also noticed that there were some incomplete thought and inconsistent events. For example, the main character kept saying they told Hunter everything and at some point they want to tell him everything then boom, he still does not know everything.
I am a type of person that can leave a book mid-way just because of grammatical errors and other reoccurring faults. However, with this book, I pushed on because the plot is very intriguing. I really love the story-line. Especially the twist in the middle of the book.
@crazywolf189 please revisit the story and edit it accordingly. If English is not your first language, you can find someone who is fluent to help. There are also some apps that can help, but be careful. Do not be too reliant on them, they have fault of their own.

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Alejandro

I found the book interesting at the very beginning. I really liked the characters. The author's characterization skill are good. As the readers we get to understand them, who they are and what they are about.
However, I did not manage to complete the story. I lost interest before I even got to the half way mark. There are events that occurred in the course of the book but I did not sense any form of tension. Yes, the characters thoughts and emotions were explain but I could not feel them. No emotion was evoked within me as the reader.
I know people have different expectations when looking for a book. This one did not meet mine.

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Stranded

This book is amazing. I loved we get to see the different character's thoughts and feelings... I need more!

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