Yoh! Yoh! Yoh! The grammatical errors in this book are mind blowing. While reading Honey Sweet, I had to stop a lot of time, pushing the laptop aside just to breathe. Apart from using the wrong words and punctuation, the dialogue is extremely confusing. Sometimes I could not figure out who was talking. Mainly because the author did not use the correct dialogue writing rules such as a: when a new speaker talks then their dialogue should be written on a next line. I have also noticed that there were some incomplete thought and inconsistent events. For example, the main character kept saying they told Hunter everything and at some point they want to tell him everything then boom, he still does not know everything.
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I am a type of person that can leave a book mid-way just because of grammatical errors and other reoccurring faults. However, with this book, I pushed on because the plot is very intriguing. I really love the story-line. Especially the twist in the middle of the book.
@crazywolf189 please revisit the story and edit it accordingly. If English is not your first language, you can find someone who is fluent to help. There are also some apps that can help, but be careful. Do not be too reliant on them, they have fault of their own.