XXPeytonXX

Dreams of a world where passion and desires don't get judged but encouraged.

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Great Read!

I love how the author described Liam's life in the first few chapters. The writing is very good and all the scenes flow smoothly from one to the next.

The dialogues are on point and the action scenes well-written with enough description to let the reader imagine exactly what the author wants.

I like the plot and the twists incorporated in the story, especially the identity of the boss. It was unexpected.

The chemistry between Taito and Liam is cute. I can't wait to see how it unfolds.

Great job author!

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Unique Read!

I would like to start by saying that this is a completely original plotline. So kudos for that! I have never read anything like this, where eating different kinds of food would give the person incredible powers. If I'm to give my honest feedback though, I couldn't really empathize with Toby. I agree that his life was sad. But the lack of self-love really got to me. Yeah, he was fat but I didn't like his extremely low self-esteem.

On the plus side, I liked how action-packed the chapters were and how Toby's powers manifested in different ways. So overall it was an entertaining read.

Great job author!!

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