Yolande Conran @yolybear

Ontario, Canada and Kingston, Jamaica

Just beginning my writing journey. Please drop some feedback in the chapter comments it will help me grow. I have always loved scary stories so I will start there. Happy Writing Everyone.

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Where am I and what happened?

The start is mysterious you start thinking about how something like this could happen and so you can feel exactly what the character feels which bonds you to her. Great start. At this time the novel is still a work in progress and the story is just developing and I can't wait to know what happens next.

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Its has only just begun.

Only one chapter in and I an loving how this is developing. The author has begun writing this piece for a competition and will be doing frequent updates. Romance horror and mystery that leaves you wanting to know more. Great story so far please keep writing it.

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Dragonman

Great action fights, balanced with emotion and a good story to go with it all the excitement. Nice read.

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Dragon man

Action packed all the way. Very exciting.

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Love it

This video game story is very well done. It really reminds you of your favorite game mine was wow and a great mix of sword art online. Go along for the ride it wont disappoint.

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400 Days in the Apocalypse.

Started reading and couldn't stop because
I wanted to know what she did next.

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