Very fast paced.
Overall, 'Murder town' is an interesting but really fast-paced story. I feel that every chapter needs a little more time and attention for the writer to better establish the setting, characters and scene in general. For me, there was a lack of context which often left me confused about where we were and what was going on, additionally, I found that the characters seemed slightly flat due to the pace, which didn't allow much room for character development. Furthermore, due to issues with the grammar, the story didn't flow as well as it could have so although you get a general understanding of the plot, you're left with many questions that continue to build the further you read. However. the concept of the story is really good and the plot is well constructed, I just think that with a bit more patience and editing, the author could execute it better.
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