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I really enjoyed this story. It has an interesting plot and is very well written.

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Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

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I loved this story from beginning to end. It has an amazing plot and it develops at just the right speed. As a person who loves drama, this was just the story for me. The characters are amazing, I love how you described everything and have read the whole thing in a single setting, so to say. The length of your chapters is inconsistent but I don't see that as a problem but rather think it gives the story a dynamic within itself.
There are a few grammar mistakes but I don't think they're drastic and they don't take away from the enjoyment of reading this story. I loved the ending and I hope to see more work from you someday! Best of luck!

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