zainara

Hi! I love writing stories and all kinds of stuff. I dream of becoming a best seller one day. Hehe just kidding I write for fun. (♥ω♥*)(●'▽'●)ゝ(✿❛◡❛)

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Good but needs improvement

This is an interesting story so far. Except a little grammatical errors, the plot is good. I'm sure it will be a great suspenseful thriller if you add some more events even though it's just the beginning.
I am myself not very good at this but I hope my criticism will help you improve. You can use grammarly as well.
Still, I'd like to read further. Keep up the good work!!

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