Zoe Pagteilan

No published stories yet

Overall Rating
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Review xD

I really, really love your story and have been comoing back to Inkitt just to keep re-reading it. I fell in love with everything: Eliana, Caelum (especially Caelum xD), Oriens and just...everything! There were a few misspelled words or typos but they weren't really that many to even notice. As for the plot, I guess I would have to say that it was quite expected but I still loved it. I would have appreciated a bit more on the antagonists's backstories, however Especially Iocus because I really do not get how that happened. Neverheless, I love you story and would love to read more of your works. ^_^ <3

Read the story now

No badges received yet

About Us:

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered book publisher, offering an online community for talented authors and book lovers. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books you love the most based on crowd wisdom.