Zondie

Hello! My name is Zondie! I'm a 20 year old first year nursing student. I love writing whenever I have some free time

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Love it!

The plot is amazing, it's well written. Every chapter is extremely intriguing and holds a lot of rich descriptions, so it's like I am right there watching everything unfold in front of me. I have to say though, maybe change the structure of your format, allow more breaks in paragraphs as it will ensure more reader retention, otherwise, having larger paragraphs can sway attentions. However, this is just a suggestion, you do whatever works best for you!

Otherwise, I think everything is well written, the style is great! Well done, it's an amazing book :)

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Terrific!

This is truly a work of art. The way it's written, it felt like I was reading a published story. This is rare to find on online reading websites, so it was quite refreshing. The story is well written with amazing descriptions. You can really view the world through the character's eyes and I appreciate that. I could feel what characters felt and although I don't understand what they might be going through. The way the characters are written, you could feel the connection between characters which I think it's essential.

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