Zondie

A must read!

If you're looking for a story that is beautifully written, with good characters, this is the one! It is an erotic story, with so far an amazing story line. The difference between the FMC and the MMC is there, however, the author has bridged the gap in an excellent and compelling way. I love how the characters are written, and their personalities are unique to them. I can't wait for more updates from the amazing author! Honestly, you will not regret it at all.

*I read all 9 chapters, I don't know why it says 4 chapters!

What are you doing if you have not yet read this book???

Seriously, this author's writing is what I needed! This other didn't just give us a small snack of lust and spice, she made sure to bring the whole spice cupboard and throw it at ya in such a elegant way. Her writing flows so perfectly, I couldn't stop reading! I highly recommend this book to anyone who was to read some forbidden love, with a good amount of spice and a good plotline. The characters are so well curated, I can't wait to see how they develop into their respected personas. So far, so good!

Make sure to add it your reading list, as you won't be disappointed!

Love it!

The plot is amazing, it's well written. Every chapter is extremely intriguing and holds a lot of rich descriptions, so it's like I am right there watching everything unfold in front of me. I have to say though, maybe change the structure of your format, allow more breaks in paragraphs as it will ensure more reader retention, otherwise, having larger paragraphs can sway attentions. However, this is just a suggestion, you do whatever works best for you!

Otherwise, I think everything is well written, the style is great! Well done, it's an amazing book :)

Terrific!

This is truly a work of art. The way it's written, it felt like I was reading a published story. This is rare to find on online reading websites, so it was quite refreshing. The story is well written with amazing descriptions. You can really view the world through the character's eyes and I appreciate that. I could feel what characters felt and although I don't understand what they might be going through. The way the characters are written, you could feel the connection between characters which I think it's essential.