ZXNV

Mystery, Thriller maybe murder and horror stories are to be found in this page i hope you'll like them because they will be giving a moral and teaching us a lesson.

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Keep up the good work

The story is quite interesting to read and the best thing is that the author tries to maintain reader interest in reading, i also like the way suspense is added although punctuation marks are added in wrong order (example inverted comas are upside down), secondly there is quick shift of scene and new scene is not been introduced properly which made me a little confused.

The plot of the story and over all theme is really good

Thank you for sharing!!!

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KEEP UP THE EFFORT!!!

it is a really cool story been explained in easy words, and yeah i like the details you mentioned it feels like i'm seeing it like that of turning in monster and it really hooks up the reader to keep reading yet some parts were where i got a little confused about what is happening.
Although i would love if you check out one of my story !!

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