What is your opinion?
Black Hole
"That actually describe this story. It has a interesting draw and I like the conflicting morals I'm getting from the prologue. Good work my friend and excellent teaser choice."
Suspenseful!
"From the nine chapters I've read so far, this story has great potential. The language was dark and evoked some emotion (especially suspense) and you could almost feel the conflicting morals going through the minds of the characters, Ian especially. There were some errors and they can throw readers off, but the story has a great plot for those who do read all the way through. I hope to see it grow and continue, as it is a very interesting, suspenseful tale. **NOTES FOR THE AUTHOR IN THE COMMENTS. :)"
Intriguing
"I came across this, and the moment I read the first few sentences, I was hooked. Your story has a wonderful draw that will immediately pull in readers. Due to numerous errors in the writing, I read the prologue and decided to review based on that first part. I thought it was fascinating that you wrote that scene from the perspective of a killer. And a serial killer/Sheriff? That's a really cool concept! You give the reader just enough to be intrigued, which is brilliant. The issue I stumbled across was the writing itself. There were numerous grammatical errors that made it a little difficult to read. If you sweep through and clean that up, you'll really have something here! The plot thus far is extremely exciting (and dark, of course), just try to pretty up the wrapping! Great work!"
