Writing dialogue in a book can be tough because it has to do so many things at once while still sounding real. Here\u2019s why:<\/span><\/p>\n

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   Making It Real but Useful<\/b><\/h4>\n

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   • Real-life conversations are full of small talk and \u201cumms,\u201d but book dialogue needs to get to the point\u2014whether it\u2019s moving the plot forward or showing who the characters are\u2014without sounding fake.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n
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     Giving Characters Their Own Voice<\/b><\/h4>\n

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     • Every character needs to sound like <\/span>themselves<\/span><\/i>, not like you or everyone else. That\u2019s hard to juggle, especially with a big cast.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n
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       Show, Don\u2019t Tell<\/b><\/h4>\n

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       • Dialogue should hint at emotions or conflicts instead of just spelling everything out, and pulling that off takes practice.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n
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         Keeping It Snappy<\/b><\/h4>\n

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         • You want the conversation to feel natural, but it also needs to keep the story moving. Too much talking, and the story drags; too little, and it feels rushed.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n
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           Reading Between the Lines<\/b><\/h4>\n

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           • Good dialogue isn\u2019t just about what\u2019s being said\u2014it\u2019s about what\u2019s <\/span>not<\/span><\/i> being said. Writing that kind of subtlety is tricky.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n
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             Avoiding the Corny Stuff<\/b><\/h4>\n

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             • Dialogue full of clich\u00e9s or overly polished lines can feel fake, but coming up with fresh, engaging lines isn\u2019t always easy.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n
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               Blending It In<\/b><\/h4>\n

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               • Dialogue can\u2019t exist in a vacuum\u2014it needs to work with the action and description around it, which takes some careful balancing.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n

                 Top Tips to Make Your Dialogues Shine \u2013 Inkitt Style!<\/b><\/h2>\n

                 Punctuation Placement<\/span><\/h3>\n

                 Let\u2019s start with how to write dialogue correctly\u2014it\u2019ll save you and your editor time on punctuation fixes.<\/span><\/p>\n

                 Example:<\/b>
                 \n<\/span><\/i>\u201cHow do you do?\u201d asked Prince Havreshire. \u201cYou may call me Timmy.\u201d<\/span><\/i>
                 \n<\/span><\/i>\u201cNice to meet you, Timmy,\u201d said the cashier.<\/span><\/i>
                 \n<\/span><\/i>Prince Havreshire placed the box of pudding on the counter. \u201cJust this, kind sir.\u201d<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n

                 Notice the pattern? Punctuation always goes before the quotation mark. Always.<\/span><\/p>\n

                 Quotation Marks<\/b><\/h2>\n

                 Dialogue is opened and closed by quotation marks. <\/strong><\/span><\/p>\n

                 Whether or not you use the double mark (\u201c) or the single mark (\u2018) is up to you and where you\u2019re publishing. Americans utilize the double quotation mark and Europeans often use the single.<\/span><\/p>\n

                 If you have a long piece of dialogue that will take up two or more paragraphs, use an opening quotation at the beginning of every paragraph and only use the closing quotation at the very end.<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n

                 How to Nail the Perfect Sentence Ending<\/b><\/h2>\n

                 If a sentence ends with an exclamation point or question mark, just write it as is\u2014simple enough! But what about commas and periods?<\/span><\/p>\n

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                 • Use a <\/span>comma<\/b> if the dialogue comes before the tag (e.g., \u201cI don\u2019t know,\u201d she said).<\/span><\/li>\n
                 • Use a <\/span>period<\/b> if the dialogue stands alone or the tag isn\u2019t directly related (e.g., \u201cI know. I was joking.\u201d She laughed.).<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n

                   Key tip: Tags like “said”<\/strong> or “exclaimed”<\/strong> modify the dialogue and take a comma. If they don\u2019t, use a period. For example:<\/span><\/p>\n

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                   • \u201cI don\u2019t know why,\u201d she said.<\/span><\/em><\/li>\n
                   • \u201cIt\u2019s fine.\u201d He smiled.<\/span><\/em><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n

                     When in doubt, match the punctuation to how the tag fits with the speech!<\/span><\/p>\n

                     New Speaker, New Paragraph<\/b><\/h2>\n

                     In order to help the reader distinguish who is talking, start a new paragraph for each person\u2019s dialogue. This lets the reader know that someone new is speaking. It also creates some white space on your page that will break up long pieces of prose.<\/span><\/p>\n

                     Throw Away Your Thesaurus<\/b><\/h2>\n

                     Here\u2019s a tip: don\u2019t overthink \u2018said.\u2019<\/strong><\/span><\/p>\n

                     Teachers often suggest using fancier words instead, but that habit can hurt your writing. \u2018Said\u2019 is simple, clear, and doesn\u2019t distract readers from the story.<\/strong><\/span><\/p>\n

                     Example:<\/span>
                     \n<\/span>\u201cI can\u2019t believe you!\u201d Delilah exclaimed.<\/span>
                     \n<\/span>\u201cWhat do you mean?\u201d Thomas yelled questioningly.<\/span>
                     \n<\/span>\u201cThat was my last yogurt,\u201d she bemoaned.<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n

                     All those tags pull focus from the dialogue itself. Stick to \u2018said\u2019\u2014it\u2019s easier for everyone!<\/strong><\/span><\/p>\n

                     Take these four rules and look over your dialogue to make sure you\u2019re following them. Odds are, if you break one of these once or twice, there are probably more in your story. Make them a part of your daily writing practice.<\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

                     Dialogue is crucial in a book – it brings the story and characters to life. The way characters speak\u2014what they say, how they say it, and even what they don\u2019t say\u2014gives readers insight into their personality, background, and emotions. Well-written dialogue makes a story feel more natural and engaging, pulling readers into the world you\u2019ve<\/p>\n

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