My Make-Believe Boyfriend

Mia: Really nice story

ktkirata: The story is really interesting. How the character described in the story is like you can see them and picture how they move, talk and feel in the every plots. Well done writer and keep it up.

Maggie Varnum: Like that it was fast paced and suspenseful...loved the romance up ended a little to fast ...would have been better if there was a Luna ceremony chapter and a birth of son with name chapter with Cole as a dramatic dad in the delivery scene .... Overall I enjoyed it very much!

JyotiRekha: Great plot Describe the life of orcos moe

Hester: Very good, was short too the point , not lingering on the abuse, pity you didn’t let him step in earlier knowing the abuse was happening, but this is almost real for some women who have gone through it, just wish they could all have a princess at te end of thete tunnel

wndymns08: I like the shorter chapters

Sheila: Loved this story so much. Great writing by this author. Glad she got to start another life with a man who will love and cherish her and her children for life.

Mojookie: This book pulled me in first chapter and I couldn’t stop reading. I love reading fantasy and a woman growing into her power.

Manjeeta Khanchandani: I liked the storyline, would share it with my sister.i see it’s 74 chapters so it’s not being dragged out for eyeball time. 4 stars only because it needs some typos fixed. It might need a more gripping start to the novel, to hook reader in