LIFE OF LAILA

Mary Wilkins: This was an enjoyable short story. Well done! 😄👏🏾👏🏾

Pav: Well written and enticing, love your style, keep up with good work.

Charmaine: THIS IS SO GOOD I LOVE IT IM GONNA READ IT LATER BC IM TIRED BC I JUST FINISHED WRITING 10 CHAPTERS IN 1 DAY!

jo987_123: This is a good story, but it needs a good editor to go through this iteration and fix the mistakes. The pov changes from 1st person to 3rd person, often, and sometimes within one sentence. It needs a liberal sprinkling of punctuation marks throughout, and a decision needs to be made about the char...

fathiahmosebolatan: Nothing is wrong with

emmylee.p.: Funny, cute, heartwarming, good writing, great characters, and a bit of spice

Biva: Quite good for a novella. Impressive writing style and we'll edited. Just one thing- Karla keeps referring herself to a stray cat and while at first it makes sense the analogy gets stale after a while.

Fah🖤🖤dah: Great chemistry, an interesting plot, and characters you can’t help but get attached to. I really enjoyed this story! ❤️‍🔥

armirrenz: Story is great! It catches your interest in reading. Very good book