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"a.r.t"

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Summary

"always respect talent"

Status
2yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

"black thoughts"

Born in a land shaped like a question mark, a curse made the skin dark. Black is the color of the blind, a pessimistic mind, it's a prison without bars, thoughts dark as a night without stars, black goggles clouding beauty from sight, dreams fade as a shadow in the night, seeds of inferiority planted deep in thoughts, when the seeds become trees their bear fruits of doubts, proud monkeys in a dying tree, living without a prophet to divide the sea.

Born in a graveyard, a place where talent and ambition are buried, a place were reality and dreams cannot be married, it's a place where dreams die first, then the mind dies thirst, thirsting for creativity, artistic declivity, it's the greatest agony, listen with your eyes to understand the irony.

Born with a birthday suit which absorbs the sun's rays, the reason why dark skins search for the sun on rainy days. Walking in a dark realm with a smile, giving life to the dark lands like the river nile. Bloodline of kings, suffering as an eagle with broken wings, a land sleeping on a bed of gold, but its people can't afford to buy blankets to survive the cold.

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