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This is me organizing my thoughts through poems because sometimes it's easier to write than to talk. Not all of them are in English,some are in my native language (German). I don't really expect anyone to see this but if you do: Have fun but I won't apologize for trauma dumping :)
Love should be easy like children's play
and refreshing like water on a hot summer day.
In love there is no wrong or right
but in towering darkness it will be your light.
If all seems lost and there is no silver streak
love is the one thing you always can seek.
But it's also: screaming and falling
it's crying and bawling
its breaking, regretting
forgiving, forgetting.
Inside your heart you'll always know
that someone is with you wherever you go.
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That was nice!!!!The last part really resonates with the reader. Love is a unique and sometimes complicated in the way it’s perceived. You captured your message very well and it came across clear! good work! 😊